rate_review Reviews

This is such a fun story! :)

Write more!!! I can sense this is the beginning of a great story! Like one of those I excitedly log back into AFF for. This Argyle sweater guy sounds like quite an interesting character, I'm kinda excited to see where you'll go with that and the dynamics of the "relationship" are new too, not often you read stories where the top is actually the bottom, or wants to be. Also, I like that you're keeping the female friend not annoying. I feel like a lot of stories have the main gay character have a female friend and she's usually someone you want to punch in the face, repeatedly. I pretty much never write reviews, but I wanna see this story take off!

Hmmm, I wonder why MASG (too long to say his name! lol) didn't say anything to Corey besides, "It's your turn" or whatever it was he said at the water fountain. Maybe he's just feeling Corey out.

And Aaron; what an ass! Jeez, how rude can you be to someone you don't even know or have ever talked to!

And of course I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE Danny; she's so sweet and kind and is always there for Corey. Loved the list she came up with, especially the one about giving head, lol.

Hope you had a great Easer Liz! :)

I'm extremely interested to see where this goes. seems like it's going to be a unique store. great job!

You have me intrigued

This one made me smile. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

hehehe. I sounds like it's going to be a cute story. I look forward to seeing the situation that causes them to talk to each other. great job!

OMG LIZ!!!!!!! YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Do you know, I have been hoping and praying these last two years that you'd be back one day? Every once in awhile I check your profile page for any changes. Omg, I am so, so, so glad you're back! You are such a terrific writer!

I was just checking on AFF before I went to bed and I saw you have a new story! Will you be doing anything with your other unfinished ones? I notice this one isn't a high school story; I'm looking forward to reading it! :)

Ok, I'll r&r tomorrow after I read it!


I'm so glad you're back Liz! :)

I must say I like this mysterious man and Danielle a lot. Haha They're interesting characters (the argyle sweater man more so than Danielle, who is quite entertaining herself). Looking forward to reading more- I suspect Corey won't be the first one to make a move unless Danielle somehow goads him into it.

I enjoyed this very much. Love the character interaction. :)