rate_review Reviews

It's getting to that point again!

I do have to say, Matt knowing that Keisha is in a wonky relationship from the start seems to be going a little better for the both of them. And Layla is getting to that sad point in her life :( where there will be no turning back.

I do like how it shows Billy's personality split a little more and that we see more of Keisha wanting to get to know him, and Billy basically denying her that chance. It shows her in a better light (sorta kinda, in my opinion) and him as more of a schemer when it comes to Keisha.

I hope this review even made sense since I'm writing this super early in the morning. Keep up the good work :) and I can't wait to read more.

Oh snap! It seems like things are heating up! Let's see how things go from here. Keep up the good work :3

He should be glad she only smacked him and didn't kick him in the balls. Swinging legs could go anywhere!

I'm liking the story's new pace, no worries.

I also like the new start of the story. For me, Billy is at least more likable in the beginning of this one than he was in the last one.

I envy your creativity in creating believable enough people with flaws and I like how they react and talk with one another. It's like a real world! Can't wait for your next chapter :D

I missed this story. It's nice that it's slightly familiar but still different, all at the same time (it gives me a reason to read the story over, haha). It also seems like some parts of the story are going to go a little faster than they did before (like meeting certain characters). Whatever you're doing, though, it still seems to have the same spark as before, so keep up the great work! I also enjoy the fast way you're uploading these chapters.

I LOVED this story when it was first posted even though I wasn't a member back then. Now that your doing it over I still just as excited and waiting for each new chapter.