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When I got to the end of your chapter, I was like holy **!! And almost jumped a little, haha. Poor Keisha :( Poor Matt :(

The cat's out of the bag now! I wonder how Charlie is going to react, I wonder how Keisha is going to react seeing her brother with a guy like Billy. I wonder how her brother is going to react seeing her with either one and knowing what probably has happened or will happen!

Your cliff hangers :( they make me want moooooar.

This story is good as HELL, please update soon.

Thank you for the shout out. I really do love your writing and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Happy to see another chapter!!
Can't wait to see what Billy is going to say now and how Keisha is going to talk her way out of this lol. Keep up the good work.

When to the docs maybe she caught a case of pregnancy.
Cant wait for more asap..

I love this story! I sat and read the whole thing thus far in one sitting. Billy is just too sexy for his own good and the bit of badass mixed in makes him irresistible. The scene at the pier got me all hot and bothered. Very well written. I have to say not impressed with the neighbor Mike yet. I think she is making a huge mistake picking him over Billy. Can't wait to read more, there are just not enough IR on AF.

Was so happy to see another chapter updated. And I have to say I still love Billy! No matter what he does with Keisha I find it so sexy, because he isn't hurting her on purpose, he is just a dominant character. I love Dominant men. More Billy and Keisha scenes please, hope they end up together I want Matt out of the picture. Update soon please!

I do think there is a difference between being dominant and being abusive and I must say, Billy has a lot of abusive traits. If her family is close to or the same as it was in the last story, it makes sense why she finds herself attracted to absuive and overbearing personalities. I do hope she grows as a character, since we're following her, or she could not grow and stay the same >.>;;

I must say, though. Billy is coming off as a jerk more and more in this one, which might be why I feel bad for Keisha more than I did before, because she notices it a lot more now. She almost cried and is too afraid to break up with him because she's afraid of getting hurt and hurting others :( poor girl. It makes it look even worse, on his part, because she was trying to make a real relationship out of what they had.

But now things are getting a lot more interesting o.o!! It's also cool how Matt isn't that great of a fighter (at least to Billy) out of nowhere, way to keep it real! Even though I felt bad for Matt :(

I also loved the fast chapter updates!

And, seeing someone that looks exactly like your Billy in the story is weird XD if his name happened to be Billy.. O.O your stories might be telling the future and you should write that I get rich in real life.

Keep up your good story work!

Im sorry billy HAS TO GO. That bullshit he pulled with keisha was awful.And keisha needs to get a backbone and leave his dirty ass behind and get with Matt.I do love your writing and I think its amazing but get rid of billy, the guy is an ass hole who needs to his asskicked. Btw I do love your writing or else I would this way. Please keep writing though I want to what happens next

Read this story when it was posted before, so glad that it has been edited and re-posted! I have just made this account just so that I could review this. Been trying to find a story like this and there is nothing like this one. It hits all the right spots for me lol, love the dominating side of Billy. Love how he is so gangsta, but he will only get rough with Keisha in a sexual way. Also loved the last chapter, that is totally Billy, not letting her dump him! Cant wait to read the next chapter, more Billy & Keisha scenes, totally rooting for them!