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It's over I can't believe those to didn't end up together...Great Story though..

Fantastic story plz Update...

Hey welcome back..

'Tis been a long time my friend. When I saw the title show up on my daily aff check I screamed. I couldn't believe it! An update!!! So, I reread the entire thing to refresh my mind and here's my review. I still love Billy. I want Billy with Ke. I know he's scary and crazy and yummy and tattooed and.. Where was I going with this? I just think he truley loves her. Love is just new to him. Is Jen gonna have those guys rape Ke? Lawd that would make Billy lose his mind! And it seemed like you ended Matt and Ke. I'm cool with that. He's a good guy and a good lay. But that's all. And really having these detectives lookin into Billy I don't like! I mean I know he's a bad guy, but I honestly don't want him to go to jail! Looking forward to the next chapter (where Billy finally realizes he loves her) lol.

Honestly one of the best erotic fiction stories I've ever read! AMAZING story line I'm hooked and dying to find out what happens! And the sex of course ;P sa naughty!

Please post more..

Gotta say, just read your story, it's captivating. Love the characters. I really want to see her with Matt, but I have this feeling she'll end up with Billy. I love how real the characters seem. I would like to learn more about Billy, maybe he's not so bad? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author! I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY! Besides the smutty goodness which are all so hot that it made me sweat, the obvious affection Billy has for Keisha is so dark and sexy at the same time. I mean I don't understand why good girls are naturally attracted to the bad boy type, but yes they really do tend to go that way. It's dangerous and risky to be with a guy like billy. There's always this fear of impending doom with a guy like him. Oh my. I'm curious as to what will happen next. Hope you update soon! :)

You are a really talented writer!
I really hope you don't make them rape Kisha like the last time...
I was REALLY happy that they didn't do it Layla in this version of the story. I just thing it would totally kill it...there would be no future left for billy and Kisha if you want to keep it realistic.

Omg I really just want to use my pimp hand strong on Keisha! ugh! I am as confused as the guys! granted loving two guys isn't easy but omg i can see why matt and billy get so damn frustrated lol <3 love your writing! keep up the good work and update soon :D!