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by Laiko

person SinfulMind
schedule September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow... i've never read anything quite like that before. Really intriguing and fascinating even. I can't wait till Stark will get into possesion of his "mate" :D
person nine
schedule September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
gosh. I dont know what i feel for this story right now... there has been steamy smex, stomach churning gore, heart warming moments of family, worrying moments of action/adventure, worrying but fascinating political machinations... you have my attention! Stark is so gross but at other times interesting... as for travis, i love how much of a dick he is... poor little Loc... with only those two options... i absolutely can not wait to find out what happens... finding out that robert and stark are kind of working together like that was such a shock but what a stroke of brilliance in terms of plot!!! and this story has soo much plot! i am enthralled by this plot... and the story about hunter and pretty and the kids!!!! so so so so heartwarming!!!! but the zombie sex is soooooo gross lol... seriously, your writing is too good when it gets to those moments... so sickening. though your writing is always good! it is just at those moments I just want to spew lol. yeah... stark and his crew are so awful! i am freaking out for Loc when he gets sent to them... poor little Loc! i worry for his sanity... i just really dont want the zombie apocalypse to happen... lol
as for your zombies and the infected and the carriers etc... very very interesting. it worries me that the infection is changing like that... and that animals can be infected. humans are totally screwed!!!!
i love how there are multiple viewpoints as you tell the story. very very effective writing!!
seriously i love this! even in the grossest moments i love this... (even as i am vomiting)
thank you so much for sharing! you are a talented writer.
person miles
schedule September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story !
Disturbing sometimes but I just can't stop reading !
Keep the good job... :)
person iriskzk1
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I'm so glad your back. I was wondering if you were going to start back working on this story again....I'm glad you did. I want to find out what is going to happen to Loc. Everyone seems to be so obsessed with him.
person Nine
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
must!!! review because this is epic but i have to go to school right now! (was reading and it is good so i am now late...) will review properly when i get home... sorry
person Raven
schedule September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ur ALIve!!! lol jk or somekind of zombie but as long a u write for me thats ok lol
schedule September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is really twisted, but I really like it! I can not wait to read more of it! Please post something new soon! I am really curious to see if Stark gets Loc!
person jaskolka
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is incredible. The fetching storyline, worldbuilding and characters complete each other perfectly. Amazing!
person FuneralRoses
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVE it!! Hope you continue this!!! I honestly can't wait for Loc's abduction and eventual meeting with Stark
person oo
schedule April 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good good. stark freaks me out.