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March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far. You've done a good job drawing the reader (me) in so that I want to know more
and try to figure out the relationships here. I would like to know a bit more about what the characters are
feeling and thinking; perhaps a bit ore explanation of why they are doing the things they do.
Keep up the good work.
and try to figure out the relationships here. I would like to know a bit more about what the characters are
feeling and thinking; perhaps a bit ore explanation of why they are doing the things they do.
Keep up the good work.
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February 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far! Please update soon!!
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February 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I got done reading both chapters and you've got me hooked. I can't wait to see where this is going and who ordered the boy to never leave that place and is he really the brothers offspring of some sort? yea I'll be back to find out!
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February 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah it's me again I just wanted you to know I just read Aten and the other one VPWL I have been looking for that author for like ever! I am so happy that you're back in the swing of things I reviewed both of those as well keep your word don't let them die here.
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March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I good start friend. Keep em coming~~~
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March 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like the first chapter, I can't wait for the second one! The characters are already engaging and make me wanna read more and more...and more! Please update soon!