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WOW! I loved this most recent chapter! It was glorious! I adore how their relationship continues to grow :) and that Hiro is still unsure of what to make of it. It makes the story far more realistic. I am glad you are not just having him fall in love with Eldrin quickly. Their relationship needs to grow and develop...and I adore that Hiro still might want to escape...that would cause a lot of drama between him and his handsome king ^.^

Just as things start to settle new threats arise. I don't think we've heard the last of Keshin and Krevin. Eldin's mother seems very dangerous. What happened to Hiro? Can't wait for the next chapter. thanks, starchilds

huh. I didn't expect Keshin to make an appearance so quickly. I'm greatly interested in what is going to happen from here. I'm super happy that he can do magic without his staff though I think it may have been an emotional thing. It'd be very interesting if he could train himself in magic use without the staff. great job!

Very interesting story. Great love scenes. I think Eldrin will need Hiro's help to defeat this crazy Keshin guy.

Hirosuke sounds so beautiful and Eldrin seems just as handsome. Eldrin seems to be developing a soft spot. Perhaps a heartless can be cured afterall? I really do like that they're getting along better, but they still have problems. No magic fix after all. :) great story and I can't wait to read more!

I have been SOOO frustrated because it took me a long time to finally be able to have access to my account so I can review this story!!! I have to say I absolutely ADORE this story! I LOVE the characters together....and their growing relationship...but things have certainly gotten to be too....easy at the present. Something has to come along to disrupt their peaceful relationship...like Hiro finds his staff...or gets ahold of that book about mind magic ^.^! <3 I ADORE this story!!! PLEASE update asap!!!!!

love it! please update!