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I really like this story, I hope you will continue it one day! :-D

Hello SilverRain!!!!

Can I just say I love, love, LOVE your story!

It is written beautifully and the development between the characters is so real, sincere, and not rushed at all.

I think that Hiro is probably still confused by his feelings for Eldrin...I mean Eldrin is his only person to talk to, connect with...etc, so maybe he is mistaking his feelings of love as something else ;)

Now that Hiro can use his mind to cast spells, he doesn't need his staff (I suppose...) I hope he attempts to escape, gets caught and Eldrin punishes him all hot yaoi-like :D

Please update soon! Please please :D

This chapter was pretty good too. I really like the new characters, the sex scene, and the doubts if heartless are really what they are.

Among other things.

Hell I like Kenshin; he's funny. I think he might be my favorite bad guy in an original story. He reminds me of a crazier Joker.

Oh my god I read the A/N and I hope things work out. You should sue the bastards for your apartment! And I hope your health improves; I really hate seeing people get like that. Plus I really love this story and hope that one day you get stuff published or enjoy your writing even more so.

My reaction was what the fuck.

I was like "How in the hell did he take over his body like that?" Then I was like "Holy fuck how did he......"

I gave up after that; Kenshin is a crazy bastard. This is the most action packed chapter yet.

In chapter 5, is Krevin and Kenshin going to fuck up their relationship? I can so see it now.

Also this is the kinkiest chapter next to the first one but hey it showed and revealed a lot of emotions. Well next to chapter 6.

Your writing is still good and I still want more story. Sorry to hear you have been ill of late, and that for some time nasty life is giving you a hard, bad run of luck. Hope you feel and get better soon and that a new year 2013 brings you better Luck and more good health. Best wishes for a Happy Holidays and a totally prosperous well New Year. AS the guy with the pointed ears said, "Live Long and prosper!" And I say may your Muse encourage your creative writing, for writing is a great help to keep your mind busy and off your daily troubles.

Sincerely Best Wishes, Gslinger

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F4ing this. Really like how dirty and how much potential it has.

PLEASE! is this the end?? it sounds like the end!! Fatally ill?! How?! Why?! Why would you just drop the story off like that! GAH!!! *table flip* I never expected to be so hooked onto this fic. Oh please update!!

PLEASE UPDATE UR STORIES SOON! I LUV UR STYLE OF WRITING AND UR CHARACTERS AND PLOT IS JUST SO AMAZING AND UNIQUE(at least to me it is^.^) I LUV Blue Jewel, and Drashin The Immortal Monster( I'm gonna read ur other story Earl Vincent Macbeth a bit later^.^) SO PLEASE UPDATE BOTH WHEN U GET THE CHANCE! I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!