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I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!

I don't like the Queen of Elysium.

I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!

Nooooooooooooo! What a cliffhanger!!!!!!! Please update soon! I hope they are okay!

Aw, poor Zachiel, I hope he eventually finds someone who will treat him well. I also hope Zara will find someone he can love. Aw, poor Loriel, it's sad that his mate is dead.

I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!

I love this story so much!

My laptop wont let me register and log in to adult fanfiction.

I love every single chapter to this story that you and friend wrote!

Cant wait for more!

Wow! Your story is just sy amazing. There's just so much to talk about. The descriptions and details and relationships of these characters are so developed. I really can not get enough of this story, it's so addicting! Ive spent the whole day reading this. You guys are doing a fabulous job on this. Please continue and I will look for another update soon!

I can't believe there are so few reviews for this and Hell! its so good!! I also stumbled upon it by chance and am so so glad that I did!
I can;t wait to find out how Gabriel reacts to Raziel being pregnant with Akai's baby!! I need more!! please update soon! ^_^

it amazing how well this is written for an RP I can't wait to see more from you guys!

This is one of the best stories i've read. I absolutely love it. I honestly stumbled upon it by hance and i'm glad I did. Raziel was really trying with Gabriel and I can't imagne what the angels thought when their general was crying..... Gabriel now has to deal with Raz who's pregnant by the enemy commander.... I can imagine how angry he'll be when he learns of Raziel's pregnancy Oh the drama!!!!

I can't wait to read the next chapter I hope it comes very soon cause I cannot wait.
This is a RP? Wow... Just wow.... Its absolutely great! I hope you write more of it and soon.

Once again you and your friend have quite a world here with very interesting characters :) I also like how the two stories intertwine. Can't wait to see what happens next. You left if at quite a cliffhanger XD