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I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!

I've only started reading this beautiful story of yours! (Chapter 3) And I went to your deviantart page. OMG what 3D modeling software do you use? Keep up the awesome work! Add another fan to your list!

I love this story so much!

I hope Verik can save Trishka and his unborn children.

Cant wait for more!

Ch. 14
Akai's comments about Raziel.... I actuallly thought Akai might of like him a bit. OOOH..... Gabriel reallly did a number on hm didnt he. I'm so excited to see more of the RP.
Poor Iruka. Thats quite a scary thought for Iruka ahving to be in the presence of Akai a second time.


Ch. 15
Golly this is interesting I cant wait to get to know more of Trishka's character, and the twins. The ruskov king must be a complete and utter idiot, his son and Verik bad mouthing him ( bad thinking him).
I can't wait to read the reactions to Trishka sleeping in Verik's bed

Do your best and fire those updates at me as quickly as you can

I love this story so much!

Cant wait for more!

I love both the stories you and your friend are writing, and I also love how you both alternate on updating them both.

I'm so happy you updated. This just seriously made my day. I was afraid you were going to abandon your story. I hope you update the companion story too. I read this story twice now and I have look at your art on deviant art. I absolutely love your character designs! They fit so well. Well, now that the plot thickens further, I eagerly await a new update!! Keep up the fabulous work you guys!

Please update soon!!!!!!!! I miss this story so much I reread it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I totally have daydreams about this story!!

I love this story so much! I love all the names you've come up with for the charactors! I love every single chapter that you've written! Cant wait for more!

Well, I devoured that first chapter! Well done! It jumps around a bit, but other than that I really liked it. I admit I was skeptical with this story because of warnings and types of creatures, but I gave it a try and I'm glad I did. The writing is sooooo much better than I expected, and it's refreshing to see something on the well-written side of things. I did NOT like Akai AT ALL when he had Kalim be with him and Avinash. I was all "My poor Kalim! Nooo!" so it was interesting to see he does have a gentle side, he's just into....certain things xD I wonder how this will pan out with Avinash also being Akai's lover. I'm curious about the slave Akai lost. He must have loved him? Anyway, onto the next chapter! Oooo there's a devianart for this? *goes to check it out* :D

Hello! I just wanted to tell you guys how amazing this story is. There is so much detail and description, you can tell how much love and dedication it took to write this. It is very addicting. I hope one day, when you guys finish this, you get this published. I'm surprised there isn't much review here, though I'm sure you guys have posted this on other various sites. This story needs more recognition! :) you guys are fabulous writers, and good luck on one day finishing this. I will look for an update soon!