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by Sweetsong22

person Jess
schedule November 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I hope youcome back to this story soon!

schedule April 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Fun concept. I like the story and look forward to more. xoxo Robin
person CorinthyaCBoul
schedule December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the story so far and can barely wait for you to continue writing
please just don't leave the story incomplete
keep up the good work
person ;D
schedule March 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
your stories are always so fun to read.

the concept and all.

you are getting a ton of hits! i wonder how many people are just shy of reviewing, because of the beastiality in the first chapter.

that was a little weird to read, but i guess it sets the idea of how uncaring the main guy is about what exactly his partners are. lol
schedule March 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My apologies, this story is on temporary hiatus. I am currently writing a fanfiction on a separate site, and it has taken up all my spare free time. I will return to Synergy once I'm near completion of the other story and my schedule opens up. Sorry for the inconvenience.
person Quill
schedule March 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not too shabby! My main complaint is that I don't quite believe it. Ironically, Jaye the alien is the only character I do believe. On the plus side I mostly like it and the concept is pretty cool. You can take this story anywhere! I'm very curious to know where.Despite not being completely sucked up into this world you've created, I'm obviously not put off. I understand it's a hard thing to do. So keep writing because practice makes perfect!
person dazedandconfused
schedule March 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

I am so hooked on this new story of yours and can't wait to find out what the mystery is behind Eyan and how he can resist Jaye's pheromone when no one else can but he doesn't even know it. I am anxious for this Reevus to make an appearance and wonder what type of character he will be. I still think Jaye reminds me of Petras which is very interesting to say the least.

By the way, please don't get discouraged by lack of reviews because I think it has something to do with this site and the recent changes AFF has made to it. I have also noticed there are not as many new stories being written or existing one being updated (or author's online)and think it's because of all these changes. It's all rather kind of frustrating and I hope that it doesn't last long and the authors' come back soon or don't leave because of it.

Thanks for updating! I am really enjoying reading this new story and look forward to the next update.

person dazedandconfused
schedule February 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I am so excited!

I nearly freaked out when I came across this new story of yours and screamed (not actually or I would get in trouble) with joy!

Jaye kind of reminds me of Petras (by his actions) and I am curious to find out more about the world where he came from.

I will keep an eye out for updates on this for sure!

person dazedandconfused
schedule February 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooops, me again!

I forgot to mention that I loved the scene with Eyan watching Jaye and am curious about the legend of his tattoos. Oh, and I think that Darkhot is a very interesting name for a planet and bet that Jaye won't be leaving it anytime soon.