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I really like Jonathan but wish he could forgo wanting to 'rape' Zack because I am afraid that might eventually tear them apart and I want them to stay together and for Zack to trust Jonathan not to be afraid of him.

I am worried how Jonathan will react to Cameron and Zack.

Update again soon, please, I really love this story.

Another two chapters? Good gods, you are amazing! *that probably sounds creepy*
But seriously, I was so happy to see that there were more chapters to this amazing story. It's progressing so nicely. Is it scary I hope these two end up together? Nah, it's not scary at all. The rape scenes are so intense. How you write them, I'll never know. But you have such a gift for writing these things. I hope to see more in the future!!

Oh, I've been waiting for this for so long now!
I was wiggling in my seat when I found that there were two new chapters!! I think I squealed like a little girl!

These kinds of sexual acts excites me. I could never personally do something like this, especially the rape scene but putting my creations in these kinds of situations makes my mind spin. It's so intense, full of raw emotion despite being under contract and just *makes inhuman noise*. It's sweet to see that Jonathan thinks of this as more than business. Silly Zach, thinking that you were just a pet. You have such a talent and I do hope to see more of this story. You're such an inspiration!

Ooooh, so great so great so great!!! Can't wait for more~~ I love this story. :D

Another beautiful and amazing chapter!~
(I was excited because i had been away from my computer for a while, when i came back there were two more chapters!~)

Is it terrible that i want to just huggle the poor dear?
I dont mind that hes naked~

...However i might get in trouble if i do such a thing.
I would rather keep my head.

Hi, I am a first time reviewer of your story and want to let you know how much I am enjoying going along for the ride with Jonathan and Zack. I love stories like this as long as the Master and Sub really love each other and there is no violent blood play involved and that they respect each other.

It's very well written and I am learning a lot more about the world of BDSM. If you haven't already, check out all stories written by author 2rainsong2 and you will be pleasantly surprised because she writes BDSM too. I love her stories and Submit to Me is becoming another favorite of mine as well.

Later, Katie.

Aww, I love them together. Also, I am glad you made Julia a likable character. Too many fics with a similar theme to this end up making the Julia type character a total bitch. It is refreshing.

OMG!! I love this story and I can't wait for more~~ I also can't until that fundraiser, I wonder what will happen ;> Thank you for writing this awesome story and keep up the good work~~ :D

So glad you decided to go on with this story ! The BDSM is very good and the characters are sensible.
Thank you for your story.

A french mother,
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth

Why on earth did i click on this?....
I hate reading stories that aren't finished.....

Because then i crave more!!! -Flails-
I absolutely love this! Im just sitting here completely being a creeper and stalking your story!!
EEEK! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!