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for Submit to Me (Complete)

by LaurenceSpencer

schedule October 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. It had a great flow and I never got bored. The scenes were exciting and sexy and the characters were interesting. It was yay. I am going to drink some more vodka now and read another one of your stories. Cheers.
schedule September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gahh!! Great ending!! A punch to Harold's face~ I couldn't have ended better~~ Thank you for this awesome journey~
person Anon
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really fricking sad that its done. SO. SAD. But also happy they worked out their problems. And punched his Father. And chapter 6 of your "More I Abuse, I Love - " is orgasmic. You are just about my new favorite author. (It used to be DannyspinX, but he stopped posting his wonderful stuffy stuff). Can't wait for your other stories!

Your Avidly Addicted Reader,
~ Cara<3
person CelticThunderFan
schedule September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I totally fell in love with this story and want to thank you for sharing it as well as taking the time to email me every time you updated. I hope to be able to read more of your stories soon. Thank you, Katie.
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh good gods, I want to cry. The story is over. But now I can just read it over and over again.

For a moment I thought you were going to separate them. My heart was racing and I think my breath got
stuck in my throat for a while. I was aching for them to stay together. But when I read about Jonathan
voiding the contract everything just shattered. Damn the stubborn man. Although all is well in the end!!
I loved when he punched Zach's dad. XD Definitely the best scene ever. *wiggles*

Sad the story is over but damn you did a wonderful job. Do hope to see more like this from you!!
person angela
schedule September 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hi

this chapter was great poor jon he is a good lover and a kind dom but zac he is crazy he can not treat jon this way naybe it is time for jon to go away and shows zac who is the boss or maybe find another lover maybe zac dose not deserve him
person CelticThunderFan
schedule September 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe there are only three more chapters left! I hope you continue to write more stories because I admire your work.

I wish Zack would stop being a little shit and grow up. Jonathan admitted he loved him and nearly broke his heart by even suggesting their relationship might not work. Now, I hope Jonathan finds another Sub more worthy of him who will love him back and be committed to a long-term or even a forever relationship.

I know Zack's young but come on be smart. Jonathan will give him the world all he has to do is ask him.

See you at next update, Katie
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, you making it normal to double up the chapters? Because I love it!

These two chapters are amazing. I love the development of Jonathan and Zach's relationship. But I wasn't really
all too pleased with how it ended. I hope that Zach does realize that Jonathan loves him and not do anything to jeopardize what they have built so far. They have such a unique relationship and it could last! Please don't force them apart!! Zach just needs to understand a bit, that's all. ._. Honestly, I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter(s)!! ^-^
schedule August 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm kicking myself for not realizing there were more chapters! But seriously, these two are so amazing!
Once again you just stun me! You're talent for this is just so...ugh!! >w< I will admit that I will be sad when this story ends. But I'll just suck it up and read it over and over!! I think I squealed at the end of the last chapter when Jonathan said he loved Zach. I can't wait to see more~
person CelticThunderFan
schedule August 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for sending me an email that you updated! I read so many stories and sometimes can't keep up with all of them, LOL.

I am enjoying reading this and seeing the darker side of BDSM. I do wish that Jonathan will eventually not be so 'violent' with Zach even though I know it's something his Sub wants. I am afraid he is really going to hurt Zack one of these days in a fit of anger and he won't be able to go back and change what he did. I want to see them happy and together in the end too.

Catch you at next update! Katie.