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M, that was so hot! I love this story so much! I hope this story has a happy ending and they stay together. Cant wait for more!

oh smutty smutty! *blush*

I wonder if the death of Alt's life mate is the reason why he couldn't get it up...

Little Atl is such a cute baby! just wanna squeeze him till he *cough* (just kidding...lol) but still, very cute baby indeed =3

Mercurio and Atl's relationship seems to have lots of ups and downs, but that's what makes a good romance story.

The family seems to like Mercurio, I guess it's another thing he doesn't have to worry about...

looking forward to the next update :)

edit: deleted my review and added it again because for some reason only part of the review showed...

little Atl seems like a lovely child, all cooing and smiling

oh! that chapter ended nicely I see... *grin*

i guess jealousy is something that works with Atl ^.~

Jelaoussex oin next chapter'WEhy not in each chapte it is my fav kind to read about ahahaahahaaH!

Atl can't get it up? lol

by all the steamy scenes I've been reading it didn't seemed like a problem... and the mating season is so close XDD

guess Mercurio will just have to help him... *smug grin*

Mercurio's glitter is a really nice detail you added... love it

I am definitely feeling this story. Though Atl is kind of driving me nuts. He just makes me want to facepalm all over the place. I'm looking forward to M's challenge(s), though. If he'll be able to use spells? So many questions.
Looking forward to the next chapter!

Love ur story, and M :) I would rlly like if M will win his 1st challenge . He needs to show that he's strong and good for his mate . If he can beat Gilda's ass i would be more then happy .
Keep up the good work, and i cannot wait for the next update :)

wow, really impressed with this story! it's a really promising fic

you update really fast! another plus!

I really love Mercurio and I hope he will be able to persuade Atl for more intimate moments (sparkly moments the lust fairy certainly needs) and so their love can... flourish? (flourish? tch... I feel like an old lady talking like that... but it's the truth... I hope Atl will soon answer to Mercurio's needs... and with the mating season so close, it will be something fun to read *blush*)

really don't like that Gilda character... she's certainly evil... but I must admit, I did laugh when she said "starved omega" (I know I wasn't supposed to)

please keep up the good work :)

I was thinking that maybe he could lose a couple of fights before he wins? Just to make things a little desperate. :o

Atl can be a really stubborn git when he wants to. Mercurio needs to hit him more often! or something, lol

Mabe and Noir seem like really nice people =]

(Why do I have a feeling Gilda will want to fight with Mercurio?)

I saw this story updated just yesterday and it's quite good. Mercutio's mischieveness and Atl's agressiveness make this an awesome story! I also like your writing, it flows very easily and I can picture the characters in my mind.

About M's fight, I don't know if I want him to win the first fight or not. I think it depends, if he's going to fight against Gilda then I want him to win and if he's going to fight an angry ex I want him to win. But if he's going to fight a female that will become the mate of a very powerful alpha (let's say more powerul than Atl...) then perhaps he should struggle during the fight and win at the end. As long as he wins and becomes Atl's mate, I'm happy :)