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This is a great story. I'd love to see you go farther with it :)

Hey.Why the sudden stop?I believe it's going to be interesting the moment i read the title.It is and there's only two chapters.How dissapointing. :(

I love this. And I am interested to see where the story is going... almost as much as i am looking forward to more steamy moments... werewolf girl is very cool... the princess is nicely feisty and then melting at the right moments lol... thank you for sharing

hmm interesting developments and some character development. This is very hot well written and I like where your going with it since nowadays there seems to be so very few new femslash stories on this site so your story is a breath of fresh air. And while I am a major fan of the whole Dominant/slightly submissive or defiant pairing will the next chapter give more info on the war, like why it is even going on or which side is more in the wrong or will it be a more "Black and Grey morality"(love tv tropes) kind of thing? And I might be presuming too much and jumping ahead but even at this point I could see these 2 uniting to end the war between their races. Can't wait for the next chapter and it seems things are about to get hot again with these 2.

Great story so far please continue. Good character development.

Nice start, to bad there wasn't more and a story to go around it, you have some very interesting characters here and I would like to see the Human Princess maybe surprise the wolf somehow....

It's a well written story. There were a couple of issues regarding homonyms and misspellings, but nothing a revision or two wouldn't fix. I can already see the characters developing and expect the lines between good and evil will be blurred relatively quickly. I appreciate that you managed a non-consensual sex scene that didn't leave me feeling dirty and immoral. Again, well done. I hope to read more in the future.