rate_review Reviews

Hmmmmm I wish there was a bit more privacy for Kala, maybe a b it of romance in her cell, perhaps with a suitor of her choice? Heck, even if she was stuck in a cell inh the male ward, at least she would have her own pick of the litter. The mating scenes were just too short and not descriptive enough. Could really get into what was happening. Longer, more descriptive scenes!!!

Hey! Still here and reading! I just wanted to say good job on another chapter, I thought it was great! I like that you obviously know about animals enough to keep an accurate description of how they move and fight.

I am interested to see how that old wolf ties in now that Kala is being rebound. She also seems to love her master very much, I wonder what the catalyst will be?

Look forward to reading more, keep at it!
-Recal

Very interesting! I like how it's from the view of a wolf, i can't wait for the next chapter!

Its so cute! I enjoy reading this. :)

Very interesting! Good first chapter, it hooked me right in! Looking forward to seeing more!

A very beguiling start to your story.

The first paragraph was very moving, descriptive with a wonderful use analogies and metaphors (as the rest of the story).

Very much like how the introduction; bringing the past to the present, was succinct and to the point. It brings you nicely to the first event which is the beginning of the adventure.

Very well constructed and thoughtout paragraphs.

Hope to read more very soon!!