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for A Guard Dog for the Prince

by Tempest

person DNight
schedule June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh no kidnapped can't wait to see what happens
person smint45
schedule May 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story!!!! Thank you so much for posting it!!!!
schedule April 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awh. It's so good. no wants to end!!! I'm glad Keith took care of the threats. will should adore him. great job
person smint45
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was amazing!!!! Too bad there are only two more chappeis^^ Hope you post them soon!!!
person RJaneyP
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good story like it a lot, the characters are great, hope wolfy save the prince from the nasty kidnappers! G
schedule February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I just read your story for the first time and already love it. I have never read a story about a werewolf slave being a bodyguard to a vampire prince and find it very enchanting. I like William or rather Will but didn't think I would at first and Keith is adorable.

I thought I would mention that you might want to enable anonymous reviews just in case there are readers who don't have an account with AFF and would like to leave you a review but can't. Another suggestion, I think that you might get more response back from readers in the form of reviews/ratings if you would change the story description to one that explains what it is about instead of the way you have it now. You need one that will catch a reader's eye so that they will want to read story otherwise they might just pass it by without reading it.

This is just a suggestion and you can do whatever you want but I just thought I would mention it. If you look at other stories, you will see what I mean.

I will keep an eye out for more updates but please don't get discouraged by lack of reviews. I love the plot and the characters plus you are doing a great job writing it.

Great job!