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KATE AND SYBIL -- WHAT THE

Richard? Why the hell would Anthony need to speak to Richard? Does he think Richard is gonna help him get to the money in the safe? lol And omg, Anthony is such a fucking hypocrite! It's ok with him to screw around (and cause death) to SIXTEEN year old BOYS, but he's 'disgusted' by Edward's relationship with Michael?! How preposterous!

I really liked the banter back and forth between Sybil and Michael. It was pretty endearing. I liked the HP reference Sybil made, but wouldn't it have been more apropros for her to have mentioned Merlin instead, given the clip at the beginning of the chapter?

And, gasp! What a shocker! Sybil and Kate were lovers! Omg...Benedict has GOT to meet Edward! I cannot wait to see Edward's reaction! lol

Oh, and Dave disappeared and isn't calling Benedict b/c of their disagreement. I hope he's not out plotting to kill more people?

Fantastic chapter Connor! Can't wait for more! :)

Holy smokes. All the plot twists in this story. There is never a dull chapter. I love this story. Thanks for the update. Now I'm wondering if edward will tell micheal about his father. I remember when you said the characters are not good or evil. I love how you can make us first hate them, then love them and vice versa.

Lovely chapter!

I am beginning to think that Sybil and Antonio might become involved together in the future?!! That would be very interesting and then Antonio could possibly become Edward's 'step-dad' and he and Michael would be 'step-brother's, LOL, that would complicate their romance.

Oh my lord!!!
This has to be the best Michael-Edddy-free chapter ever.
This cool, intelligent and calculative Edward I like... and I like a lot. Is wonderful to see how strong he became against a sad excuse of a man that hides behind a title to excuse himself....taking into consideration that the idiot was found with a boy who sadly perished and also hired beautiful Cedric for his entertainment.
Hmm.. Katt and Sybil; do not ask me why dear, but it kind of did not surprised me as it should have. Interesting turn none the less. Makes you wonder what will happen between them in the future.
Anyways dearest, I hope you update soon. Because this is become better and better.
Lets see what pathetic and vengeful daddy dearest will do, and how this will be confronted by Sybil, Michael and Edward.

Really enjoyed this chapter where the tension and the revelations, originally secreted away in the pasts of Edward and Kate, made a definite impact.

Sybil and Kate were old lovers who vied for the affections of Anthony all those years ago. Trying to digest this information, as he is so unbearably detestable, I am sure there were more worthy men they could have hated each other over – Oh wait, Robert took them all!?!?!?!!?

Edward, abuse at the hands of his father at such a young age, was actually quite sad to read. With all his twisted history, he is actually a well-adjusted adult.

Also, can Edward actually be a tad jealous of Sybil and Michael’s ever growing friendship? Believe that Michael will eventually become her confidant and she may have some revelations herself.

Anthony, simply put, is perfect as the antagonist and though he is a complete and utter shite, he is stirring the pot nicely and a great character to hate.

What can I say? Fantastic writing as usual and look forward to more very soon!

Loved this chapter! My absolutely favorite scene was when Edward stood up to his father. So long overdue. Sybil might be cold and unable to express motherly love, but Anthony is just cruel.

go edward! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
and kate, so wasnt expecting that.

Thanks! Enjoyed this!