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OH MY F'ING GAWD!!!!!!!!!!!! This was a spectacular chapter. Thank goodness Edward didn't fuck Cedric. I was sick to my stomach reading that part. And the whole scene between Anthony and Kate was fricking brilliant. Her telling him that Benedict was living with a man hit him deep in his little bigoted heart. And Edward's confrontation of Anthony had me cheering! Yes, oh Yes!!! Loved it!!

Wohoooooo!
There you go darling!!

It has been by far my favorite father/son interaction piece so far. Damn!! It is so energizing to read.

Thanks and update soon.....

By the way, I am still missing your hot scenes though ;)

1. I'm so effing proud of Edward. He didn't cheat on Micheal again. 2. Anthony was proud of Edward for outsmarting him, weird. 3. I think I have everyone figured out but next chapter will have a curve ball in it. I just know it. *gives you a long stare*

Hey Connor, ok I didn't read the chapter yet, I just needed to comment on that awesome little clip of "As the World Turns" fan fiction! I only started watching it when I heard about Luke and Noah and I watched it till the bitter end. But this little fan fic is so spot on! I can picture Reid saying exactly that to Max and him and Luke giving each other goofy (well, as goofy a smile as Reid could manage) smiles. Great choice Connor! I gotta figure out where I can read the rest of that...


Ok, on to the story! :)

Oh man, I gotta start taking notes again! I stopped with all the St. John family drama, but now that Phillips, and co. are back, I gotta start again! lol

Ok, so Dominic is cahoots with Phillips, and Antonio (not to be confused w/Anthony, which I have done!) is in cahoots with David. Dominic killed Sam, Phillips killed Paula. Ok, I think I'm good. lol

Oh, and I keep forgetting Anthony doesn't know about Benedict. Or at least he didn't. Ok, on to the next chapter! :)

Damn Michael, you and Edward keep fighting. Funny how they were going back and forth and totally ignoring Sybil.

Ok, so when I started reading the chapter Edward thought Aidan McNash looked like shit. But then halfway thru their conversation, he looked "sexy as hell". How could look like shit and sexy at the same time? lol

Benedict was so funny when he first saw Sybil. And thoughts of his mom and Sybil together. lol What a picture!

But the funniest thought was Sybil's - My. My. The things you find out about your kids. Omg, hysterical! lol

But yeah, Michael was a bit out of line. I think the green-eyed monster was talking instead of the real Michael. Hopefully he can patch it up with Edward before Edward's seduced by Cedric. And Edward would probably go thru with it just to spite Michael.

Oh, and Edward should totally call Benedict and find out how he knows of Dave....

Great two chapters Connor; can't wait for more! :)

Oh crap!! WTG Michael!! I can't believe he's jealous over Edward's brother! He was so out-of-line accusing him of being infatuated with Benedict THEN stating he fucked his brother in front of Sybil. Not cool. lol.

Oh my gosh, this story is just like a wild and crazy roller-coaster ride with all these twists and turns, it's making me dizzy, LOL. I have a feeling that Michael and Edward are heading towards a breakup of sorts. So, sad about that but hopefully they will eventually work things out. I loved that Sybil thought of Michael as a 'caveman'. I can just picture him dragging Edward by his hair into their cave to keep him all to himself and with no sharing or he will use his club, LOL.

Thanks for the two updates, I've missed these guys.

Katie

Shit!!! After reading your A/N at the top of Ch. 27 Surprises, I'm scared to death to read this installment!! Seriously, I'm pulling up my big girl pants and taking a deep breath. Hopefully I'm still standing at the end....lol.

Two chapters in as many days - Thank you!

Edward come back!!!!!! Anytime Edward needs to release any pent up stress, sex is usually on the menu, usually. Hope he does not bump into Cedric (or Benedict!).

Michael usually being on the receiving end of Edward’s verbal snipes and cutting remarks, needed to get his turn, and he surely did. Unfortunately, the infatuation dig and then the goading, was not a good move. A great turn of events, nevertheless, and actually delighted in Michael’s little outburst. Guess Michael was not the 'nice person' this time around.

Sybil and Benedict - a cordial meeting between two wary natures and it seems there is a genuine ‘like’ between them.

Just a thought - wonder if Benedict experiences anything similar to Edward (as they have a bit in common). Maybe other family members have (or had) the same abilities! – Just thoughts running through this fevered mind.

Dominic, the mysterious man of the moment. Really would like to know what Dominic has over Anthony and Robert- looking forward to that reveal.

Great chapter, thoroughly enjoyed!!!!!