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ATwo new characters and we finally get to see a little into Dominic's life. It's funny that Sybil let a little of the green eyed monster come into her heart . . . twice, but I can see her and Edward's relationship mending when this is all over. I can't believe, that there's still going to be another book.

Holy mother of god. At least Edward didn't do his nephew, but said nephew did his grandfather. Ewwww. I didn't see that coming. My jaw dropped. This is six degrees of seperation to the fullest. I loved Micheal's little toddler meltdown moment. Are we going to get more of how David and Micheal's dad trust each other?

Ive just read On the Line and this is two days and i love them!!

OMG is Cedric, Sam's son? x

A nice chapter lots of character connections.

Yes, nothing Anthony does is really a surprise. Would like to know more about him, how he was raised, it may help to understand why he is such a git. Or was he born with all that natural charm?

Actually had a little sympathy for Mason, even in his harsh way he really does want the best for Cedric. Not sure where this relationship will end up (it has so much against it) but it will be interesting to follow. Just hope that nothing happens to Cedric you never know when Robert will show-up.

Perception of Dave/ Davide has changed somewhat. He actually seems, dare I say, amiable. However, this is all about deception, and misdirection, so looking forward to read how amiable he really is.

Where would we be without our two boys? Do not think their argument was a deal breaker, but time apart maybe good for them –maybe.

Samantha went to have her baby in village in Donegal, and a couple that already had a girl adopted the baby boy – Cedric? Robert said he used to know someone who lived in Donegal a curious statement. Did he know Samantha? More twists.

Great job once again!

Oh my gosh the twists and turns in this story leaves me dizzy! So I am guessing that Cedric is the son who was given up. Poor Samantha, such an unhappy life and a senseless death. I am hoping even more that Cedric will survive and be happy. I cant wait to find out what happened to Dave, something sinister I suspect.

Love love love! I just love Edward's character and I love the development of each of the characters you've introduced so far. I definitely don't like Edward's father but that bit where he becomes a little human just seems to redeem him a little and I hate to admit... but I'm starting to feel a little sympathetic towards him. I excited for the next chapter :)

Edward, surprising Cedric with his awareness. A surprise he did not go further? Yes, but glad he did not. Still managed to get a little grope and a kiss in the process though. :- )

Anthony receiving a lash-back from all areas; no allies anywhere. Love his reaction to the revelation about Benedict. And, what kind of medical practitioner does Anthony see that tells him the practise of homosexuality will cure prostate cancer? – Or did I totally misinterpret that!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Great chapter, highlighting where Anthony stands with the ‘family’. Interested to see what he will do next, and how far he will go to try to regain control.

More soon!!!

Shit, Edward should have told Anthony when his father asked him if he met Benedict that he already fucked him years ago. lol I woulda loved to see how Anthony's face was then! Ha, Anthony's so out of the loop here.

Loved Kate's line, "Another fag for your collection." Too funny.

How did Anthony even find out about Benedict? I didn't remember anyone telling him.

And I didn't realize Michael left; at the end of the last chapter he was going to apologize to Edward. What happened?

Ok, Connor, anxiously awaiting more! :)

The chapter was wonderful! You covered a lot of people in this one:) I'm liking Mason and Cedric. So daddy is missing? I just don't want him to get hurt. And I might even like Edwards mommy dearest. Ok the jury is still out on her ^_^

WoW! You turned the heat up on this one wOw!! I got happy when Edward kept his cool:) I wouldn't have been able to keep my hands to myself after that exchange:) It's official I like Sybil. But the really BIG bomb was the mom's wOw. Didn't see that secret coming! ^_^