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As much as you describe Edward I can't seem to grasp the image of him being very handsome when he keeps popping in my head as an old man, which is weird. But loving every minute of reading. Keep up the good work.

i dont quiet understand...didnt Dave blow up Anns and Michaels neighbour house into pieces? Why is Antonio playing all nice and friendly with him now? As i remember Dave did build a small bomb..and it suppose to kill the family members. He did same to Ann and her mother..who else would want to blow them up? Hmm...the transvestite? Who disappeared days after? Did he kill the priest as well? Tho its kinda strange if he did, since the priest and the lawyer been both killed same way, so i assume they both been killed by same person. But then even if Dave didnt attack Michaels family with the bomb or Anna..his father doesnt know. He should still assume that Dave is a potential Killer..enlighten me please xD

Great story, I'm hooked!

Holy shit what a chapter!!!

Richard has been playing dumb this whole time! He's working with Darla and Monique(whoever she is) and Dominic! Shit, does Liz know.

And Anthony didn't even bat an eye at the fact that his son-in-law is screwing around on his daughter. He commends him for it.

Robert has Benedict! And how stupid is David? Robert called using Benedict's phone for God's sakes! How could David have missed that? He thought it was Benedict calling him - the red flag should have went up once he heard Robert's voice and not Benedict's.

Shit, shit, shit, who just called Edward? Omg, I bet it's Robert, no, probably David or Antonio.

Damn good chapter Connor! Can't wait for the next one! :)

I love this story...the suspense is killing me (in a good way). Hope you update soon

Enjoyed the conversation between Michael and Edward, have wondered just how much their tentative relationship could take. The root of the problem is Michael’s need to reaffirm their union. Maybe with all that is going on, he just needs that one anchor, something guaranteed and palpable. Edward, though he sees the situation for what it is, is unable (or unwilling) to provide that assurance at this time. Just a humble viewpoint.

Poor Sybil, feeling the effects of her illness. Loved their gradual progression into a relationship effectively created overtime and though at the beginning she proved to be a bitch, maybe having Edward by her side as her health falters, is what she really wants but would not admit to.

Believe that she may confide in Edward with information that may help him personally. Not sure why, but just believe that she has nothing else to lose and if she were going to say anything, it would be to Edward.

Robert having the upper hand is interesting. On the other hand, did he ever stop? Do like Benedict and would hate for anything to happen to him –but you can never tell, no one is safe!

Richard such a toad, he really grates on my otherwise calm disposition. His stupidity could do more damage than if he had any wits about him. However, I do believe he will stumble into learning something valuable, which may upset the clustered dynamics of the household. Not sure why I believe that, but such as it is.

Cracking job as usual!

Sorry but Edward really makes me mad sometimes, LOL. I feel so bad for Michael. I mean what does he have to do to prove himself to Edward? I kind of wish Michael would let Edward chase after him for once and play hard to get.

Edward is my favourite character. Micheal...I like him too, but he's such an ass. He just doesn't understand. And I don't understand how Micheal can be an ass to Edward but when Edward says something mean it's a big deal. And Sybil -GAH!- I hate how she's getting all the sympathy points. How it's okey that she's an awfull person and a dreadful mother who doesn't love anyone as long as she cares for Edward. *cough* Sorry, I got bit carried away x_x'' That's what a good story does to me. I gets under my skin. Keep up the good work! ^^ And please, let Micheal understand that he's a prick and he's expactations are sometimes too high.

Holy fuck! Holy fuck! Holy fuck! Cedric's Edward's nephew! Anthony fucked his grandson! (ewwwww) Holy crap!!!!!!


I forgot Edward didn't know about his mother's relationship with Kate. It was only Benedict who knew.

And Sybil shouldn't hate Benedict; he can't help who his parents are. lol

And who the fuck is Darla? And Monique? And how does Darla know all this info about Michael and Edward and everyone else?

Bloody Hell Connor! This is getting good! lol

Alright; can't wait for the next chapter! :)

So much going on and in the midst of it we have Edward and Michael –very prickly situation. This time Michael is playing the same game as Edward, keeping his distance and his emotions in check (as best he can). Damn they are hard to work out sometimes -but would not have it any other way!

Lots becoming known, but still waiting patiently on the details surrounding the elusive Dominic especially blackmailing Anthony (the reason should be interesting) and pulling the strings with Robert. And Dave, is he really that misjudged? Well each of the characters have great duplicitous roles and I do not believe that Dave is anything but guilty of much more than we are privy to.

Have not read much about Aidan in a little while. Wonder how he is coping and what he is doing. As well as Karen. Is she doing ok? Did she eventually take early maternity? Have missed her little updates. And Richard (the germ). Did he do any work for Anthony in the end?

Reading again that Robert knew the mob boss Mickey Hanrahan in Ireland, so he was the one he knew in Donegal and not Samantha –maybe. They all seem to be living in a very small world.

So afraid to even hazard a guess – have had my mind warped, and knocked for six so many times, all I will do is smile and be patient and let it unravel – for now.

Nearly 1am, tired and waffling - but wanted to read and review before lights out, literally.

Looking forward to the next chapter.