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for On The Edge

by Connor00

person dazedandconfused
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention this little tidbit too; but did Edward forget that Michael put himself in the line of fire to save Edward when he threw him down on the sidewalk and covered his body with his own?! I think I have to go calm down now and get ready to watch the Super Bowl with my friends.
person oo
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh no... edward cheated.
person FortunateM
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dear oh dear, what do we have here? This is so very interesting!?!?!

How low does Edward feel right now? I guess pretty low since he ran. But I believe that Edward needed some form of comfort, as there was no-one he could turn to in England. Edward believes that sex solves everything, so he is predisposed to seek solace from that vice when he is stressed. Gregory was his relief – If he got his arse on the plane it would have been Michael!

Michael, same situation, however, there are people around who are there for him to lean on. Even with the added element of ‘New Boss’ would Michael seek comfort in the arms of another? I can’t see it happening as he is too loyal, but if he is angry at Edward??????

**Again, thank you for a story you can really sink your teeth into – still loving it**
person Lisa
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm a bit confused and too lazy to go back to the first book to look it up. Mickey Hanrahan, wasn't he the dead guy who Mary Flannery ID'd instead of her awful husband, Davy Donnelly? Or was Mickey Hanrahan the guy who hired Cuthbert to kill Xavier? Or Mary's current IRA husband? I'm sorry; my brain obviously is not working and I can't remember! :(

And what's with Dave all of a sudden having a conscience? He feels bad that Paula died? Is he for real? And he's such a hippocrit; he's complaining about the paparazzi being cockroaches who made their living destroying others' lives? Is he on crack? Isn't that what he's been doing this whole time?????? Destroying people's lives?

Now, why the hell is Michael being so stubborn? Why won't he call Edward? He told Edward he loves him. I don't understand. He won't return Edward's phone calls (Edward should keep trying tho). Why? You claim you love someone, you're in a relationship with this person, why wouldn't you call them and let them know what's going on with you?

Loved the Gregory-let's-fuck-behind-the-cricket-shed; too funny! But.....Edward, YOU FUCKING SON OF A BITCH!!!! WTF?????? Did you totally forget about Michael?? Yes, you should be angry; you should be FURIOUS with yourself for doing that!!!! I'm so angry with Edward right now I want to smack him upside his head.

And what a coincidence that Benedict "knew" Edward, lol. Small world, huh? So what was Dave looking up? What is in his "file" about Edward? What "destroying of lives" is he planning now pray tell?

And now we wait until Tuesday......well, shit. This sucks. lol Your story is such an addiction Connor! :)
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay! two chappies, lol!
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nooo! I can seriously feel that Michael's going to seek some solace from some other guy. ugh. I think the picture shows Phillips' mentor or something, lol ^_^
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another fine instalment.

It seems as if the emotional aspects of the story are taking its toll on the characters, making these, by far, more stirring chapters.

It is nice to slow down and digest the impact of the events of book 1, which again has been nicely thought out and executed. I believe that Michael will end up on a plane to ‘Merry Ole England’ soon. Hopefully!
person under draco
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope Micheal calles Edward soon or flys over to him. I wonder where Edward's father disapeared to. Micheal and Edwards mothers are something else. Yay for Antonio standing up to his soon to be ex-wife.
person roro237
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love you! (you know in that author and reader kind away:) I was checking to see if maybe you had posted. I knew it was to soon but I thought what the heck why not and BAM! You had:) Both our boys are in such sad places right now. Ok I'm moving to the next chapter ^_^
person reader
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you need to tell me, was Paula's death by chance and the hitmen was supposed to go for Michaels mother (attacking her car). Or was really Paule the one who should die, therefore they messed with her car and made her go to taker her mothers. If so, why would she be killed, what did she knew? I would understand if Philips order to kill Lucia(? not sure if it's the sister or the mothers name anymore), but why Paula?
And what up with Edwards mum, is that plot made up by her and his sister or is she really sick?

By the way, are you from europe? Well I am and at the moment it's freezing here, but nice. Winter is my favoitited time of the year, I love the snow!
Thanks for the double update, happy to see the updated so soon.