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Ooooh, I am so worried about Michael! I wonder if he will have like amnesia when he wakes up and won't remember Edward and that they had a relationship now that would be an interesting development. I am relieved Benedict is not hurt or even worse dead. Very good chapter and thank you for updating so fast! You are an awesome writer and one of my few favorite authors on AFF.

I'm going to guess that Dominic wanted to get caught and is just acting like he's really mad because Inspector Chenoweth is Monique, because we haven't gotten her first name, and she's going to get him out. Poor Edward he's really fallen for Micheal, he didn't even deny being Micheal's partner when Benedict told the police.

YEA!!! Edward is alive! Micheal is alive! Ben is alive! He also got to see his a-hold of a father. Antonio is alright. The big bonus is Robert P. is arrested! That man is such an escaped artist I'm still a little nervous about that. Mason was being a complete jerk. I can't wait for his and Edward next run in I think it will be fun:) You dealt us another Ace. I loved it ^_^

Wow, so much happened in this chapter. I'm trying to wrap my head around it all.

I'm wondering though if Phillips really let Antonio and Dave go. And what will happen now that Phillips and Dominic have been arrested.

And Michael; he better be ok. :)

Awesome chapter as always Connor! Seems like most of the pieces are falling into place. Well, maybe not Richard. Still wondering what's up with him.

I am so relieved everyone got out of that pretty much unscathed, well, except for poor Michael whom I hope will be ok and the poor Helicopter Pilot who was killed. Anway, a lot happened and pieces of the puzzle are all coming into place more clearly now. I still really like Sybil she grows on me with each chapter. Mason is such an aggressive jerk. Awesome chapter, Connor! ~~~~ Katie ~~~~

Shit, shit, shit. Did Robert shoot at the car the second before Dave pulled his trigger? Omg, did they get Benedict? Benedict should have tried to manoeuver his way closer to the door and tried to pull at the handle with a free finger or two and then rolled out of the car and kept rolling. Shit.

What an intense chapter. Unfortunately it took me over an hour to read it b/c my eyes were glued to the Olympics. Sorry.

Well at least my wait time now will be shorter than eveyone else's. lol

Awesome, awesome chapter Connor! Now I'm on pins and needles waiting to see what happened to Benedict.

Oh, and I really liked the excerpt you used for the chapter; "Paying the Piper", by Libby Drew. Is this the same Libby Drew who writes for GayAuthors.org? Just curious. And thank you so much for not including another HP excerpt. :) I love HP, but there were so many HP excerpts, I missed wondering chapter to chapter which excerpt you were going to use. lol

I think the writers block just left the building:) WoW!!! That was a back breaking mind blowing earth shaking cliffy ^_^ I really hope to read you soon:)

Oh my gosh, what the heck just happened? I am in shock, shell shock, LOL. I am glad you seem to be over your writer's block and hope to be able to read more soon.

Oh my gawd, Oh my gawd, Oh my gawd..... Connor, what an explosive cliffhanger to leave us hanging with you naughty author! I am so afraid to read next chapter that I can't breathe..... Antonio, Dave, Edward, Michael and Benedict, Oh my gosh!!!!! I hope someone (maybe Edward when no one was looking) managed to get Benedict out of the car before it exploded. I am so freaking out now... this was so unexpected and I can't wait to find out who survives. Welcome back from the world of writer's block and you came back with a bang, LOL. Huggles, Katie

First – Welcome back!

Second - arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh -how could you!!!!!

All I can write at this moment is, please update very soon.

Such an epic chapter -simply wonderful.