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February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Salisbury chapter review;
Oh my God! Mason is one crazy and possessed asshole and Cedric better be careful! I am confused... you were not implying that Robert is going to kill Cedric?!
Edward finally learns he has a half-brother just wait until he finds out who it is and that he slept with him! That will throw him over the edge!
Dominic is scarey and I bet things are going to start getting even worse with him around.
I thought for a moment that Karen was going to call Edward and let him know Michael was in his home land. I am still anxiously waiting for them to see each other again.
~~~ rushes to next chapter ~~~
Oh my God! Mason is one crazy and possessed asshole and Cedric better be careful! I am confused... you were not implying that Robert is going to kill Cedric?!
Edward finally learns he has a half-brother just wait until he finds out who it is and that he slept with him! That will throw him over the edge!
Dominic is scarey and I bet things are going to start getting even worse with him around.
I thought for a moment that Karen was going to call Edward and let him know Michael was in his home land. I am still anxiously waiting for them to see each other again.
~~~ rushes to next chapter ~~~
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February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
New Directions chapter review;
I am wondering when Benedict is going to start figuring out there is more to Dave then he realizes. I think the gun is finally opening his eyes just a little to the mystery behind his older lover.
Ok, this chapter proved my point that Mason is obsessed with Cedric!
See ya tomorrow!!
I am wondering when Benedict is going to start figuring out there is more to Dave then he realizes. I think the gun is finally opening his eyes just a little to the mystery behind his older lover.
Ok, this chapter proved my point that Mason is obsessed with Cedric!
See ya tomorrow!!
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February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love mason and cedric. so many lives and stories in this! wonderful. what did senior st john get himself into? good lord, hes got a fucking troupe of killers after his ass.
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February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 10: Wow!! Anthony has prostate cancer and had surgery. So does that mean he can't top during sex anymore which is why he switched to boys? Are the boys fucking him? Sorry for being ignorant about that. Just trying to get my head straight.
I'm very curious as to what Kate's plan is. I'm sure it's money. She wants her son to get his share. Oh, and I love how Edward now controls the Estate and it's holdings!! Edward got one over on his father and it was lovely.
I'm very curious as to what Kate's plan is. I'm sure it's money. She wants her son to get his share. Oh, and I love how Edward now controls the Estate and it's holdings!! Edward got one over on his father and it was lovely.
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February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is where the opaqueness of the initial plotlines, which had blurred slightly, seems to have more clarity between the different relationships, and divulged more about the intentions of the characters and intimated possible direction.
Once again great writing, with a lot of personality. Mason, touch of brutality and more tangible than Dave and Dominic; far less cultured, but just as dangerous. It makes a nice change,from the logical personalities of Robert, Dave and possibly Dominic who seem to have an ‘explanation’ for their actions, and are taking specific steps to achieve their goal, however twisted.
Benedict and Dave – Love? Dave may just be setting him up with the prints on the gun? Feel that Dave is still playing a game with Benedict, just too convenient, he does seem to have feelings, but limited.
Michael and Edward – Love? These are very complex characters with real problems and therefore waiting for more angst, before they even shake hands.
Sybil and Karen – Frenemies once, but do not think there is hate with these two, just inconveniences.
Benedict and Edward –Edward does not know that he slept with his brother. So that should be great reading.
Gregory and Dominic, could be possible victim and Murderer? Dave and Earl, did they know each other: someone who had influence and money who could not help his mother - Too easy?
Well– you are definitely not the linear plot writer; far too imaginative.
Thank you again for another sleepless night!
Loving it!
Once again great writing, with a lot of personality. Mason, touch of brutality and more tangible than Dave and Dominic; far less cultured, but just as dangerous. It makes a nice change,from the logical personalities of Robert, Dave and possibly Dominic who seem to have an ‘explanation’ for their actions, and are taking specific steps to achieve their goal, however twisted.
Benedict and Dave – Love? Dave may just be setting him up with the prints on the gun? Feel that Dave is still playing a game with Benedict, just too convenient, he does seem to have feelings, but limited.
Michael and Edward – Love? These are very complex characters with real problems and therefore waiting for more angst, before they even shake hands.
Sybil and Karen – Frenemies once, but do not think there is hate with these two, just inconveniences.
Benedict and Edward –Edward does not know that he slept with his brother. So that should be great reading.
Gregory and Dominic, could be possible victim and Murderer? Dave and Earl, did they know each other: someone who had influence and money who could not help his mother - Too easy?
Well– you are definitely not the linear plot writer; far too imaginative.
Thank you again for another sleepless night!
Loving it!
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February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 11 and 12: Ok, I am soooooooooo loving Mason and Cedric together. Very hot!! I love alpha male cops and pretty boys together. Yummy!!
Second, I am dying to know what the hell is going on with this Dominic character and Robert!!! And response to A/N: Thanks for reminding us about Gregory not being a saint. I totally forgot about his marital situation. My "disappointment" in Edward clouds my thinking from time to time...lol. And yes, I admit I was very pissed at Michael at first for being a homophobic asshole towards Edward. BUT, he did a 180 and redeemed himself big time! So now I wub him. And well Edward is still Edward. But I am rooting for Edward to join Team Michael. All he needs to do is acknowledge his feelings for him and keep his dick out of other guys' orifices! :) I don't think it's too much to ask! (snickering)
And SHIT!! I guess Dominic DID take care of Edward for the time being by hanging Gregory before he heard back from his source about the risky business his father was in. And obviously Dominic is behind the risky business. Now I am getting very scared for Edward. He has no idea what the hell kind of mess he has gotten himself in to. Oh, and he's going to shit a brick when he realizes he's fucked his half-brother! I can't wait for him to find that out!
Again, story is progressing and is awesome as ever!
Second, I am dying to know what the hell is going on with this Dominic character and Robert!!! And response to A/N: Thanks for reminding us about Gregory not being a saint. I totally forgot about his marital situation. My "disappointment" in Edward clouds my thinking from time to time...lol. And yes, I admit I was very pissed at Michael at first for being a homophobic asshole towards Edward. BUT, he did a 180 and redeemed himself big time! So now I wub him. And well Edward is still Edward. But I am rooting for Edward to join Team Michael. All he needs to do is acknowledge his feelings for him and keep his dick out of other guys' orifices! :) I don't think it's too much to ask! (snickering)
And SHIT!! I guess Dominic DID take care of Edward for the time being by hanging Gregory before he heard back from his source about the risky business his father was in. And obviously Dominic is behind the risky business. Now I am getting very scared for Edward. He has no idea what the hell kind of mess he has gotten himself in to. Oh, and he's going to shit a brick when he realizes he's fucked his half-brother! I can't wait for him to find that out!
Again, story is progressing and is awesome as ever!
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February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So Stan saw right through Castellani. Michael's just as bad as Edward and now I wanna bitch slap him too! :(
When the fuck are they gonna call each other? They just plan on going the rest of their lives NEVER SPEAKING AGAIN???? It makes no fucking sense. Men, they're idiots, that's all I can say.
So Phillips is the one who ordered the hit on Luciana? And how come Castellani, etal, never figured out the "hit and run" was a planned hit? With the house bombings and the "bad guys" gunning (pardon the expression) for the Castellani's and Edward, why WOULDN'T they think the "accident" was related?
And wth? Benedict is Edward's half brother? And they fucked once? Haha, that's pretty funny. What, did his mother just find out now? He's over thirty for Christ's sakes! And why was it "cutting it close" or whatever he said when he reached his apartment? Does he mean the whole conversation w/Dave about Edward? He must have thought it was really odd that Dave had a whole folder on Edward.
Ok, awesome updates as usual Connor; can't wait for more!!!! :)
When the fuck are they gonna call each other? They just plan on going the rest of their lives NEVER SPEAKING AGAIN???? It makes no fucking sense. Men, they're idiots, that's all I can say.
So Phillips is the one who ordered the hit on Luciana? And how come Castellani, etal, never figured out the "hit and run" was a planned hit? With the house bombings and the "bad guys" gunning (pardon the expression) for the Castellani's and Edward, why WOULDN'T they think the "accident" was related?
And wth? Benedict is Edward's half brother? And they fucked once? Haha, that's pretty funny. What, did his mother just find out now? He's over thirty for Christ's sakes! And why was it "cutting it close" or whatever he said when he reached his apartment? Does he mean the whole conversation w/Dave about Edward? He must have thought it was really odd that Dave had a whole folder on Edward.
Ok, awesome updates as usual Connor; can't wait for more!!!! :)
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February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 review
Ok, team Michael checking in, LOL.
I am still sorry to say that Edward is an asshole! Michael finally calls him and he doesn't even say that he is sorry about Paula! I want to kick him in his sissy balls. I still can't believe him and poor Michael is still hurting so bad and Edward makes jokes?!! Seriously!!!! Grrrr.
Something tells me Michael will be going to Salisbury, England! I hope he meets up with a handsome (would it be Scotland Yard?) investigator to work with since I am sure he can't just go to another country to investigate a crime without their authorization, at least I dont' think so.
Now, on to read next chapter!
Ok, team Michael checking in, LOL.
I am still sorry to say that Edward is an asshole! Michael finally calls him and he doesn't even say that he is sorry about Paula! I want to kick him in his sissy balls. I still can't believe him and poor Michael is still hurting so bad and Edward makes jokes?!! Seriously!!!! Grrrr.
Something tells me Michael will be going to Salisbury, England! I hope he meets up with a handsome (would it be Scotland Yard?) investigator to work with since I am sure he can't just go to another country to investigate a crime without their authorization, at least I dont' think so.
Now, on to read next chapter!
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February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 review
Oh, I love Karen so much, and hope she gets through her pregnancy alright and that Edward and Michael are the 'Godparents'!
Anyhoo, Michael resigning from the force and going to England to catch Robert! How can he arrest him and then leave the country back to the States if he is not acting under authority! If Michael kills him, they will arrest him. I am so confused.
Edward is going to be in Salisbury? Hmm, I wonder how they will meet up again. It should be very interesting.
Robert killed Scarlet!!!!
OMG!!!! On to the next chapter.
Oh, I love Karen so much, and hope she gets through her pregnancy alright and that Edward and Michael are the 'Godparents'!
Anyhoo, Michael resigning from the force and going to England to catch Robert! How can he arrest him and then leave the country back to the States if he is not acting under authority! If Michael kills him, they will arrest him. I am so confused.
Edward is going to be in Salisbury? Hmm, I wonder how they will meet up again. It should be very interesting.
Robert killed Scarlet!!!!
OMG!!!! On to the next chapter.
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February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 review
Finally, Michael is in England, it's about bloody time!!!
I wonder if he will be running into Inspector Chenoweth and Sergeant Mason, that should prove interesting!
Thanks for updating 3 chapters today! I will check back tomorrow!!
Tally Ho!!!!
Finally, Michael is in England, it's about bloody time!!!
I wonder if he will be running into Inspector Chenoweth and Sergeant Mason, that should prove interesting!
Thanks for updating 3 chapters today! I will check back tomorrow!!
Tally Ho!!!!