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I really like Mason and Cedric even though Mason is kind of a control freak, LOL. Please don't let Cedric get killed, I am begging you.

Finally, Edward and Michael are together BUT no thanks to Edward, that lame brain, LOL. I don't like that Michael had to push himself on Edward. After Edward hung up on him, I am surprised he didn't just give up but that goes to show how much he really loves the stubbor Brit.

Oh, prostock69, I think it was Michael who told Liz that he loved her brother not the other way around, LOL. Edward has still not comitted himself in the love department yet but I bet it's coming.

I like Liz too!

See ya tomorrow, Connor!

I wanted to also mention that I am still MAD at Edward for not having the decency to at least tell Michael he was sorry about his sister, Paula, being killed! I don't think he ever has and he knows how much it hurt Michael! To tell you the truth, I don't even know what Michael sees Edward. Edward is conceited and thinks only of himself.

Sorry, I had to get that off my chest.

Dazed

Holy shit Connor! I disappear for a few days and WHAM!!!! I have seven chapters to catch up on! lol

Ok, I got thru chapter nine....feel horrible for Cedric (I keep thinking of Rob Pattinson in HP-oh, and yeah, Cedric the Entertainer! lol) Anyway....Scarlet wasn't talking about Phillips, was she? Was the fax about Edward's father? I just got that feeling. Which of course would mean that Phillips killed Scarlet for nada. Well, shit.

I love that Michael called Edward, but hate that Edward can't tell Michael how he feels. And I want to smack Michael for not calling Edward the second he landed on British soil. I think if they all (Dave, Phillips, Michael (haha, I forgot to call him Castellani) and Edward) all see each other in Salisbury (with Benedict of course, lol) Edward is gonna be really upset that Michael didn't call him to let him know he's there.

Ok, on to the next chapters! :)

Hey Connor! It's me again!

I was wondering and don't think I or anyone else has asked this question yet but would you please consider putting up some Deviant Art images of Edward and Michael! Also, Mason and Cedric too!

It would be super awesome.

Love the story. Thanks for the quick updates. Already can't wait to read more. :)

Ch. 12: No no no no!!! Aidan and Edward cannot happen! I swear you are now being deliberately evil by even hinting at it by Aidan finding Edward attractive!!! OMG! I swear I will cut his dick off if he even contemplates screwing another guy until he deals with his feelings for Michael. And besides, Edward has filled his quota of turning seemingly "straight" guys gay. No more!!! LOL!!!!

The gun play between Dave and Benedict was hot. :) And Mason and Cedric! Wow! Mason was straight wasn't he? Now he's turning into a possessive psycho with Cedric. I'm not sure how I feel about these two yet. I do find them very hot together. I love possessive Alpha males. But I'm kinda of scared for Cedric in that I don't want Mason to get violent with him if he doesn't submit. Mason obviously has strong dom tendencies and he's simply reacting to them with Cedric. Cedric has never had a father-figure or a man who gave a shit about him. He's been prostituting himself since he was 15 in order to survive. I think Mason wants to help him but he might be going at it the wrong way by forcing himself on Cedric. But then again, that may be what Cedric needs. Obviously, Mason's behavior sexually
turns him on. I think the anger he shows Mason is anger he has at himself for liking it, and that in turn makes him scared. But Mason is facing a huge battle because Cedric is used to being on his own and independent, that the thought of actually trusting someone else to care for him is scary as hell. He won't give up easily. I'm looking forward to the battle though. :)

Oh, and I've totally forgotten about Edward's abilities. I hope he goes and finds Gregory's body and tries to see what his emotions say of his death. I think he's going to find he was murdered.

Hey, I really love your fics, so many twists and turns, you have a very convoluted mind(compliment,not complaint!) I also liked the excerpts from other authors, at the beginning of the chapter, I was also intrigued by Maya's fic, and looked for it, but couldn't find it. :( Would you mail me and let me know, many Thanks.

I love you!!
Finally a sex scene!!! Too short for my liking but a hot one nonetheless. I really like this new pairing Mason x Cedric...just yummy.

Really interesting and excellent as usual dear.
Keep on the good job and update soon.

Confrontations chapter review;

Ok, I have to admit there is just so much going on and so many different characters that I get confused sometimes BUT that's a good thing because it keeps me thinking!

Anyway, I kind of like Benedict and hope he doesn't get hurt. He also seems to truly care for Dave and I just hope that isn't his downfall.

Holy shit! Mason and Cedric! I never saw that one coming!

I really am looking forward to Mason and Michael possibly clashing, that should be interesting.

I can kind of see why Edward is so messed up in the head like he is, with parents like his, who needs enemies?

Why would Edward think love truly sucked if he wanted Michael? I am confused by that thought.

On to next chapter!

In The Room review,

Holy shnitz!!!

I think Cedric better be very careful of Mason! He does seem to have a loose screw and is one dangerous dude!

Cedric is playing with fire and I hope he doesn't get burned.


Nice interlude chapter!