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for On The Edge

by Connor00

person roro237
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WHat! Edward!! I'm trying to understand his sexy point of view:) He doesn't want to be in love with Micheal and their miles a part right now. Plus he wants Micheal to experience his new life style. Hey I know men sometimes think with their other head:) Then their sorry later. I totally enjoyed ^_^
person roro237
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You know I think mama C. is worst than Edward mother. Edwards mother has always been a girl-dog but mama C. in self righteous mode beats cold hearted girl-dog any day! I'm glad Mike will date oh no shoot pool with someone:)I like what you said about everyone has good and bad in them and your story has had that. Rob comes to mind. The love he had for Patrick for so long was wonderful but what he did in the name of that love was crazy. I'm here all day till I get caught up. ^_^
person roro237
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WoW! Yea baby now Micheal can go to England!!!! You know what else I like is how you give us some of everyone in a chapter that's so amazing. Your story is getting better and better with all the twist going on. Ben-a dick is Edward half brother he slept with! The recording in Rob's office! Finally meeting the Earl! Mama C. wanting dad to get his stuff! For me she is the most evil person in the story so far!(sorry) I just dislike her more and more. I'm happy there's a chance Micheal might be going to England?! ^_^
person roro237
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Bamb! My hope happen:) Mike is going to England!!!!
person roro237
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I liked the 'Confrontations'!!
person oo
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omg, explosive. correct!
i think mama is partly trying to make up for being so horrible, and the other part is shes sticking up for her kids just to piss papa bear off! hooo boy, and its working!!!
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!

Very much like the way in which the perceived character of Sybil has altered slightly from being completely cold and unemotional, to quite shrewd, fairly rational, and prudent. And defending both Edward and Michael (brownie points), could she actually be proud/respect her son? Definitely!

Dominic the puppet master! What is the true connection to Robert? All Robert’s skeletons are literally falling out of the closet, so what else is there to hold over him? Robert is also making a lot of mistakes, is he becoming a liability?

Anthony, what a nasty s***! Where is Dominic/Dave/Robert...or any hit-man when you need one!!

Do not believe there is animosity between Kate and Sybil, but believe they will be allied in some shared venture. Maybe in the need to protect their sons - something is simmering.

Antonio wanted to know the whereabouts of Michael. Is he therefore on the hunt for Robert? Possibly.

Right now the story is in a great place; good balance of characters and storyline – But knowing your creative mind, nothing is as it seems! - Great stuff!!!!
person clovermax
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like watching Sybil bait Anthony- fun.
person roro237
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
All I can possibly say is MM hot ^_^
person roro237
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I didn't see that coming!! I love that brilliant mine of yours!!! You keep us on our toes!!!!