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Ch 11 - Haha I quite liked this ficlet. Something about Cedric is wonderful.

Ch 13 - I love Mason. I'm not gonna lie.

CH 18 - My review for ch 6 was referring to the revelation that Benedict is Edward's brother. That was just such a huge shock when I read it. That's pretty fucked up, though. The guy Dave is fucking is his brother. A sadistic part of me is excited for the day when Edward finds out. Anyway, I love Mason and Cedric and if Cedric dies I'll cry. I want Edward's father to die a painful, slow death. The gall he has to comment on Edward's relationships when he fucks kids young enough to be his grandchildren, and some of them male. Yes, I am mad at a fictional character. I finally caught up with this story! It's bittersweet. I'm caught up but I have to wait for updates. Ah, well, you update fast.

P.S. I always love the quotes you choose

Thank goodness Micheal is there! The cold double meanings of most of the conversations in Hillside Manor. You need your boyfriend by your side:) It was wonderful when they both said it. Then Mike took it where it needed to go by telling Edward he didn't want him sleeping with any other men. Not that either of them would have been able to again I think:) It said absence makes the heart grow fonder that would be true for the boys ^_^

Hey there!!!!

Love the feisty Cedric! The whole exchange with Cedric, Mason and Glynnis was absolutely hilarious. Cedric’s retorts are hysterical. Favourite part:

“You’re a baby,” Mason told him with a finality that spoke volumes.
“A baby you like to fuck,” the kid said... - Classic!?!?!?!?!?!?

Feeling for Aidan at the moment, and the part with his mother was heartbreaking. Which way is he going to turn?? I really hope he informs the police, he can’t do this on his own.

Enjoying the growing relationship between Sybil and Michael, it seems fairly genuine and I truly believe she wants Edward to be happy. I believe she likes Michael a lot, and she was trying to explain to him, why she is the way she is, and in turn Edward.

Richard could be trouble for Edward. For him I am guessing it is the money and the title – looking forward to see his ulterior motive.

Will miss your regular updates but most of all your quality writing!!!

Thank you again for sharing Connor – will be waiting!!!!

***Happy writing***

FM

ooooh, the mama is so... comlex. i hate her, i like her, i hate her, i like her. i see this is an area where you have to see the greys, and not in black and white.

I was actually a bit scared for Michael when Sybil asked him out to the garden for a talk. I think she's being sincere in her want to get to know Edward. And I was actually shocked when she said she was glad he was there. So is she impressed with Edward that he could get a man to fall in love with him who was engaged to a "striking" woman? It seems so...lol.

Richard is an ass of the highest proportions. Doesn't he have his own life to worry about without having to stick his nose in the St. John Family's business? The question is why does he care? Is he worried about how it will affect his image. Edward handled him beautifully, though. I think I would have told him to "fuck off" and so would have Michael. Edward, however, is way too dignified at times..lol.

And my dearest Michael seems to have charmed himself in the St. John family with little backlash for now. He's won over Sybil, Sam and maybe Liz.

love your stories read the first one in a day and love how the second one is going so far . i wish edward could get back his title , just because he is gay he lost his title this is so bad how little his family think of you, imagine edward having a baby through surrogate that the child bone marrow helping edward mother or something like that. the son that u disregard like a piece of paper is the one to save her. just wild thoughts going through my head while i read the story.cant wait for more .

Ch 19 - I think you do a marvelous job at showing how Edward's mother does care for him, not sure about her children, in her own weird and fucked up way. Considering the fact that most authors on this site update maybe once a month (if you're lucky), I think we can wait two weeks. You spoil us rotten.

Chapter 6 - OH BOY. THIS chapter. This chapter.