rate_review Reviews

It is so great to get back into the swing of the story!

It seems as if the stress from the various situations is getting on top of Edward. Therefore, it is good to read that Michael, unfazed by his mean streak; a consequence of his stress, can handle, and even delight in his frosty nature – for now!

Underestimated Adrian, he is actually quite brave to request a date with such a strong and dominant woman. Much more confidence than I gave him credit for. Still feel he is a little naïve – but we shall see.

No real surprises concerning Liz and her jealousy of Edward, normal with siblings from all walks of life. However, having a little of that jealousy directed towards Michael is surprising. Think she would be none too pleased to learn that Sybil likes Michael too.

Richard, the word smarmy always springs to mind when I picture him, which I believe is apt. Really want to see what kind of damage he can do as Anthony’s ally before I pass judgement other than he has a weak disposition and easily led.

Always looking forward to more!!!

FM

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Thanks,

Katie

Thank you for the update message, great to know of your progress and a definite 'yea' on the mailing list.

Look foward to reading more very soon!!!

FM

Grrr, I was jumping up and down for joy.....until I read the "chapter". lol

Ok, I'm patiently waiting. Well, not so patiently..... :(

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please inform me if u update the fic. thanks

Totally being patient here! No worries :) Thanks for letting us know!

Alright, I just finished your On the line fiction today and started reading this... until chapter 4. Like... whatHAPPENED?, WHAT IS WRONG WITH EDWARD, WHY THE BLOODY HELL DID YOU SAY 'MAYBE?!' So... frustrating... ugh. I liked it very much, but it seems to hurt seeing Edward off like that, 'dating' others, when he has someone as hot as Micheal waiting... *facepalm* I have to stop reading today and might, maybe read tomorrow when I suck my sympathy for Micheal up. I hope the ending is good, or else there'll be another murder case for Karen, Cristine, Michael.*coughedwardcough* But altogether, you are an amazing writer, an ideal of mine. I'm not gay nor bi, but I am into these M/M fictions because of these fictions of yours.

I think it's been two weeks Connor! Actually I just checked the calendar; it's been fifteen days....I've been going thru major withdrawal here and I NEED MY FIX dammit! =)

So I'm hoping the next chapter will be up soon; my refresh key is ready to fall off......

I have just finished reading your other story "on the line" and excitedly jumped on this one! I was wondering what Benedict does for a living... did i miss it or is it a secret? I have to say my feelings about Dave have changed a lot since he was first introduced, I find myself wanting a happy ending for him and Benedict. Oh I have so many things that I love about this story :D I just don't have enough time to write it all down. I can't wait for the next chapter XD.

Two weeks until the next chapter? Well, I'm glad I read this days after you posted; now I have a shorter wait time, lol.

Richard is a sleaze, isn't he? My mouth dropped open in shock when Sybil dismissed him, but let Castellani stay. Omg, what a brush-off! lol

I feel bad for Aiden; this Steven character sounds very dangerous and now he has to watch out for his mother.

Awesome update Connor! I'll be waiting with bated breath for the next week and a half! :)