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Holy fuck Connor! Ohmigod!!!!! What an ending! Shit!

So many questions! Who the f is Alastair? If he was in another chapter I don't remember him. Yvonne though, isn't she the one who was talking to Richard on the phone a few chapters back? Oh wait, isn't she in cahoots with Dominic?

Jesus, and he escaped. Shit. He's gonna be after Edward, Benedict, Antonio, anyone he can kill.

Funniest line of the chapter: "Oh my God, I fucked my grandfather!" Ha, Cedric's priceless. lol

And who the heck ordered Ellen to poison Sybil? Was it Anthony? But Ellen wouldn't be stupid enough to think he'd marry her; he's already married to Sybil. Oh wait. Once Sybil would be dead then they could marry. Hmmm or is it Richard? But Richard is definitely married to Edward's sister. Damn. You are one great storyteller Connor!

What an amazing chapter! I can't wait for Book Three to come out! :)

And congrats on your new job! =)

I can't believe part two is at an end already.... so waiting to read the next book in this series. I kind of missed Michael so hope he has bigger part in next story.

Wow! We have come to the end of book 2 and what a superb read it was.

So Sybil confronts Ellen. It was an interesting meeting and sets the ball rolling to find out who instigated the ruse to poison her.

Edward, Benedict, and Cedric all clued in –just about! Wonder how much it would shake up ‘grandfather’ when he finds out. Believe he would have some choice words for Cedric. Glad he is thinking about school, possibly something positive coming out of this -possibly.

Did I miss when Sybil spoke to Edward about no longer dying? Wanted to be a fly on the wall when she told him, and was looking forward to how she would say it, and how he would respond. Now, wondering if she has told everyone.

Alastair finding pleasure in groping a photo of someone, who could be anyone of the many people we have met along the way. Possibly Edward, at the mention of 'sparks would fly' could it mean physical or psychic? Look forward to finding out in the next book.

A dead Philips and an escaped Dominic, could Edward be calling Michael?

Thank you for your continued updates; will be on the lookout for the final book.

I love the story! I can't wait for you to update more! I just have to say that Cedric, as Edward's nephew, would be his father's grandson not grand-nephew ^^;

Holy shit this just keeps getting better and better Connor! Omg, if Edward had fucked Cedric that night, then he would have fucked his brother and his nephew. Just keeping it all in the fam....lol

And I have to say this: Edward is such a fucking tool. Poor Michael. Michael gave him his heart and Edward just stomped all over it. I understand that Edward has no clue how a real relationship works. Even when he was with Xavier, they didn't have a traditional relationship. But Michael is there for him; Michael can show him how being with someone works. But he just shuts Michael out and they're both suffering. A tool I tell you; he's a tool. :(

And besides, he admitted to Michael that he was terrified when he found out Michael had been injured. At least he FELT something. Michael can teach him how to FEEL Goddammit! lol

And Mason, wow, he has it bad for baby St. John. lol Not sure how Cedric's gonna react to that!

And OMFG, did Anthony pay Ellen to poison Sybil? That's right up his alley, right? Holy shit! I'm glad that she's gonna live, especially since Edward and her have bonded so well. Maybe Sybil can talk some sense into her son about Michael; she always liked Michael. Well, not like she has much experiences with good relationships, obviously, so really, I don't know if she could help Edward at all. But maybe Edward could talk to her at least.

What an amazingly awesome chapter Connor! :) And since it took me so long to read it, I won't have to wait as long for the next one! lol =)

Well, things are finally wrapping up, but what about my Edward and Michael? By the way, I adore Cedric and Mason.

Edward and Michael, oh dear, where do you start? Set in their ways: running to love (Michael) and running away from it (if only he knew what IT was, but not willing to hang around long enough to find out (Edward)), they are destined to be running for a while.

Lady Bradford is going to live (you are sneaky!). What are the ramifications of that revelation? More to the point, will she tell anyone? Know this is going to be interesting.

Cedric and Mason, if any two people were so unevenly matched it has to be these two. Even more so than Dave and Benedict (but can see the appeal). Mason is doing his best to do right by Cedric, in his convoluted, ‘what can I also get out of this’ way and feel sorry (just a tad, mind) for the knock back, as it would actually benefit Cedric.

Edward receiving the news about Cedric, and wondering when the surprises are going to end! Personally I cannot wait for more.

And finally, with grandfather into young boys, did he EVER have sex with Cedric?????? Truly cannot remember, but just in case it comes up …ewwwwwwww -one can only cringe at the possible thought.

Thank you for another great update!

Well, I knew Edward's family had problems but now I know why he has his issues, LOL. I am keeping my fingers crossed that Edward and Michael work things out. Thanks for updating and looking forward to the rest of this sequel. ~ Katie ~

Everything seems to be wrapping up nicely if a bit suddenly. It was almost too much to process at once. The bad guys have been mostly conquered. The lost nephew has been found. Michael’s and the matriarch’s health issues have resolved. The wicked father has been deprived of any opportunity to corrupt another off spring. Now if only Edward would stop being an ass and let himself believe that he deserves what Michael can give him. And it would be nice if Cedric will let himself love Mason now that he will hopefully have some security/self-sufficiency courtesty of his new family.

Thank you for another great update.

Richard, poor fool, coming unstuck with Darla and Monique, and the possible threat to his son. On the other hand, is he? Would not put it past Richard, to be the one orchestrating this supposed extortion, possibly to share the money with D&M, but the killing part (which could have been a mistake), is using it to his advantage. Cannot wait to read how this pans out.

The animosity for Edward by Mason is just perfect. Could not imagine how he would have reacted if Cedric had actually slept with Edward. This hostility will definitely cloud his judgement going forward.

Actually, love the relationship that has developed between Edward and Benedict, it seems there is genuine fondness between them.

Dominic and Samantha, and Anthony knowing all -such a small world they all live in.

Dominic and Philip’s eventual capture, for me, seemed a little too easy. With everything that has happened so far (and there has been a lot), thought they would be captured under a hail of bullets or by someone who was looking to carry out painful and torturous revenge. Interested to read what will happen following the arrest, as I do not believe it is that simple.

Finally, Michael. My dearest sweetheart what has the author done to you? He actually risked his life to save Benedict. So, what now for Edward? A touch of guilt? An about turn of emotions? A thank you, but you shouldn’t have. And for Michael, with his tattered emotions (souvenir from Edward), what next? This is really going to be interesting.

As always, looking forward to the next chapter.