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That last chapter... I WAS SO SCARED. I thought you were gonna kill off Krys! ...err, I mean, "kill yourself"? Or your "character"? Whatever. I thought you were gonna end it by saying you eventually got sick and died and broke Amara's heart. (Im kinda confused. This IS based off of your guys' actual relationship, right...?) Anyway! Just. Don't. Break. My OTP. I might be forced to rage-quit, and if that happens I'd have very conflicting feelings about whether this deserved the rating I usually give it. You might lose a star! >:( (This is very emotional for me. Sorry. XD I get very into what I read. I even reference the story/this pairing to my Dom all the time. Killing someone off, even fictiously, could be very bad for my mental and emotional health. It'd be like killing a Weasley. Imagine Hermione without Ron, Forge without Gred, Arthur without Molly! Nobody. Gets. Away. With THAT.)

"Amarys" is my OTP. XD Or should it be called "Karma"? XD The latter is more fitting for such a relationship, in my opinion. Still, I SHIP IT!!!

I usually don't dig consensual sex scenes due to a dark upbringing but this was well written.

While I wouldn't say it was a brutal punishment, I can say that it was an effective punishment. Maybe it's just the music right now, but I could almost feel the sadness and other such emotions that Amara must have been feeling in that chapter.

So what sort of questions will the fair Amara be answering? Just the general sort of stuff that was asked last time around?

Well that answers the question of why I wanted her to dance;) Awesome chapter! Amara did GREAT she is my new hero! Heroine? lol Thanks for the update!

Glad to be of assistance.

Oh boy... a pretty sexy short chapter. But dear me. Poor Amara, saying such foolish things at the end. I look forward to seeing what sort of punishment she will receive.

Thanks you soo much for the email, the chapter you sent was one of the best of the entire story! So hot and still so affectionate I could NOT stop smiling through the entire thing! Keep up the wonderful writing you have a gift!

Well now. Good to see you back and writing. Usual decent wonderful work at the first few new chapters. But the last two were a bit of a surprise. I don't know why I didn't expect you two to pull a flip and switch roles. But it was pretty awesome none the less. Makes me hopeful that I'll have such a wonderful relationship with the one I love, or at least something pretty close to it.

Hope you guys are doing well. Although it's early, a very Merry Christmas to you two. I hope to see more work from you two. Good luck!

Happy Anniversary!!!

I'm enjoying this very much, you write beautifully, and the characters are interesting. I love the fact that Amara isn't a 98lb stick and Krys find her so erotic just the way she is! That is refreshing and I love the couple dynamic. Can't wait for more. Thank you for the story!