rate_review Reviews

haha Awesome! That was such a great twist, I was certainly not expecting it. Very well written too!

As far as I know the reviews are okay for the author to use in order to respond to other reviewers. Specially when they aren't writing another chapter in the case of a oneshot like this one. But next time you might want to make a topic on the AFF forums if you have the chance. Just to avoid any rules about reviews.

It was a heck of a story, but I never expected to see a story with vagina dentata as part of the overall plot. Will this slave girl be a continued part of the overall story or was she just a side piece? I like her, but I wouldn't try having sex with her knowing what she has. But in any case, good job on this story, great writing, beautiful ending with just enough wording to allow me to get a beautiful mental image of that slave going to town on the fat woman at the end.

Definitely an interesting short story. Are there plans for more? I'd like to read more of this world :).