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January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
epic... that's what this book is ^_^ It isn't just about the plot... it was the way the writer forms the words into a sentence... the thought, the intelligence, and the wealth of lessons that resonates from it that made me love it so much.
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January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Bloody Hell, this story is going to give me a hernia lol, omg nothing is as it seems. wow can't wait for more!
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January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! I just jumped off the "On The Line" roller coaster ride! Chps 26-29 were so much FUN!!! Wow! Things were cleared up but other mysteries still remain unsolved! Robert Phillips is a bastard! OMG, I can't believe him! What he and O'Neill did with/to Francesco was deplorable! No wonder Caller Dave is pissed. And I hate to admit to this, but I hope Luciana gets more than her hands blown off when she receives Caller Dave's package. I'm really hating that woman right now. I don't care if that makes me a terrible person. I just hate religious bigots so much. And this story is really pushing that button in me. I want to smack her so badly. And I think Antonio is also a closeted GAY! I've getting major vibes off of him. He's too understanding, too caring for his fellow gay friends. Too quick to come to their defense.
Further, I'm now convinced that Caller Dave is Father Kane!! Ooooh!!! Edward was standing right next to him!!! AND I'm convinced that Father Kane is the same priest that David Caswell said Sven Sandstrom's parents sent to Sven to talk to because David said he was tall, and extremely good looking for a priest! So this could be the first connection of Caller Dave/Father Kane to one of the Vics!! But I wouldn't be surprised if I'm wrong!! lol.
And OMG, thank you so much for the hotter than hell sex between Edward and Michael. Wow! grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr :)
Further, I'm now convinced that Caller Dave is Father Kane!! Ooooh!!! Edward was standing right next to him!!! AND I'm convinced that Father Kane is the same priest that David Caswell said Sven Sandstrom's parents sent to Sven to talk to because David said he was tall, and extremely good looking for a priest! So this could be the first connection of Caller Dave/Father Kane to one of the Vics!! But I wouldn't be surprised if I'm wrong!! lol.
And OMG, thank you so much for the hotter than hell sex between Edward and Michael. Wow! grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr :)
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January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
BooM!! That was a shocker at the end:) I didn't see that train coming. You know I'm nervous I really like Micheal's dad. But I'm afraid he might be involved. All the old school boys have had male lover. I just wonder about Mike's dad?! ^_^
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January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30, at the end. I was like :o .
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January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Micheal's first was a yea baby:) That was great! Your last lines in this chapter was another boom boom boom. She a girl dog but I don't want her to get blown up. ^_^
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January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I still have a feeling about Micheal's dad. I know he loves mama but I can't shake the feeling he's really in love with a man. Soon as I write this I have to go back and read the meeting with Father Kane again. I didn't let all the details in because I was so worried about Micheal's talk with the folks and the bomb on the way:) No wonder Edward didn't like him Father Kane that is! I'm sorry I'm jumping all over the place:) The mystery and the out of the closet first love the secrets in the family wOw! It's so exciting! Thank you for spoiling us with three chapter again. I LOVE IT ^_^
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January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying the story. Thanks for being so fast to get updates out...However... that last cliff hanger was just mean. (ha) how am I going to sleep with that hanging over my head!!!! Great work anyhow!
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January 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
The aspects of your story that stands out above everything else for me, is the strong and well-developed characters, which causes the reader to believe they have an actual vested interest in the well being of the characters. Karen and her pregnancy, Edward and Michael (will they make it), and the relationship with their family members (are they worth it). All embedded in a stellar storyline.
Each chapter reveals a layer of subplot that literally pushes you into a particular direction and train of thought, and just when you feel you have obtained a decent grasp on the situation, something more testing and provocative is revealed and the previous assumption slowly peels away.
Your writing reminds me of John Connolly, one of my favourites. He has a wonderful blend of humour, crime and supernatural, with against the grain gay characters.
I cannot praise this story enough!
Looking forward to tomorrow, as I have done everyday for the last seven days!
FM
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The aspects of your story that stands out above everything else for me, is the strong and well-developed characters, which causes the reader to believe they have an actual vested interest in the well being of the characters. Karen and her pregnancy, Edward and Michael (will they make it), and the relationship with their family members (are they worth it). All embedded in a stellar storyline.
Each chapter reveals a layer of subplot that literally pushes you into a particular direction and train of thought, and just when you feel you have obtained a decent grasp on the situation, something more testing and provocative is revealed and the previous assumption slowly peels away.
Your writing reminds me of John Connolly, one of my favourites. He has a wonderful blend of humour, crime and supernatural, with against the grain gay characters.
I cannot praise this story enough!
Looking forward to tomorrow, as I have done everyday for the last seven days!
FM
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January 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Connor; you're right! I had to Google it, but you are right; Alan Rickman played the Sheriff of Nottingham. lol Sorry.
Ok, on to the chapter....
Ok, on to the chapter....