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OMG!!!! That man wasn't at home the last time Karen and Edward went to talk to him. I can't wait for the next chapter:) Oh yea baby it's there ^_^

The light bulb finally can on ^_^

Found this after classes today and read it ALL. Wonderful story. I was sitting up on the edge of my couch all evening. I even forgot to eat dinner^^. You are a great author and I can't wait until the next installment. Cheers, SA

Thank you Catiemon (review 30th Jan 2012, page 9) for the ‘Goodreads’ link - Connorblond, you certainly are making a well deserved splash!

I really hope you consider this as a published novel in the not so distant future. I appreciate you are writing for fun at this moment, but your talent is so apparent in every page it truly merits a wider audience, and more adoring fans!!

Nevertheless, 28-30 chapters were stonking great fun with more fantastic twists!! Ed and Mike (old friends now), are such a joy to read, and their sex scenes DAMN!! Michael is certainly on the exponential learning curve.

Look forward to your update as always!

I totally love this story it's like I am reading a novel and I can't put it down! I adore Edward and Michael!

By the way, you can reply to all of your reviews by setting up a review link for your story somewhere in the forum(and readers can ask questions on it themselves too then you can reply to them on an individual basis). Maybe you should check out the info & support section of AFF or ask one of the site moderators. I don't know how or I would walk you through it but I do know it can be done so check it out.

I hope that perhaps in the next book that Edward and Michael follow Dave to Britain!!

Ok, I finally finished the three chapters from yesterday and yay, yay, there's more! lol

Thank you for clearing up the whole Dave sent the finger, but O'Neill chopped it off thing. Now I understand. hahah :)

Ok, but I think with Xavier and this whole Francesco thing, everyone is losing sight of the fact that these blonde boys are still being killed. Who is doing this if it's not Dave?

And I totally understand where Dave is coming from. Not that I agree; I don't, but didn't Francesco die like twenty years ago? Why is Dave doing what he's doing now? Why didn't he do anything when it happened?

And why did Xavier have to die? He didn't have anything to do with all this mess. Of course he could have died as a way to get to Edward, but still, why?

Oi, ok, on to the next three....hopefully no one will blow up at Antonio's and Luciana's house. Even tho Luciana is a bitch, but it's hard to blame her entirely b/c it's the way she was brought up. It's her mother that was horrible with her homophobic thinking. Wait, why hasn't Dave ever tried to get back at Luciana's mother?

@prostock69: hope you're feeling better! But look at it this way; now no one will bother you while you're trying to figure out all these murders!

And don't you hate it when the kids are bothering you and want shit, and all you want to do is sit and read?! lol The nerve of them, making you do mother-like things! hahah

And I'm obsessed with this story too; I think everyone readng this is! You're smart though; I would have never thought of cutting and pasting all of Dave's phone calls so you can refer to them at a later date. I bet you'll figure this all out way before the story ends! The rest of us will be caught in the dust! lol Well at least I started taking notes, hehe. :)

@FortuneM, you're very much welcome ;)

@Connor, I know I keep on saying it, but I really love this story. It's the first thing that I'd check in the net everyday... I think to say that I'm obsessed with it is an understatement ^_^

Chps. 30-32. OMG!!!!!! Luciana has lost her mind!!! The fact she tried to guilt Michael into "not being gay" by killing herself is below low. And she said Michael is no longer her son. If I were Antonio, I would have told her right there "Then we are no longer married" and I would have walked out. But he did the next best thing: He went to Michael and told her that he's leaving his mother. I was cheering while reading it!! Yes, she deserves nothing less than to be alone with her self-induced misery.

Michael has turned into a horn dog!! I think it's so cute he's starting to recognize his attraction to other men like Stan the fireman. However, he can look, but he better NOT touch.

Ok, now off to the main plot of the story! Robert Phillips fucked Davide!! Because Davide offered himself up in order for Phillips to leave Francesco alone? I'm positive the O'Neill provided the drugs that killed Francesco and they covered it up. I knew Davide was Father Kane but to find out that Father Kane died 4 months ago and Davide assumed his identity was shocking! Davide tried to blackmail him into doing what exactly? But in return, he would help find the serial killer!! Then next scene Robert shows up at the precinct to tell Michael and Edward what Davide said to him and to confess he has photos and documents to prove their guilt! So what angle is Robert playing here? Did he go along with Davide's request?

I was NOT expecting Phillips to go visit Cuthbert in jail!! He has known him for 25 years. Why would Phillips care who killed Xavier and what will he do with the information? Is he trying to get back in Edward's good graces? Or is this something that Davide wanted him to do? (all rhetorical questions..lol)

Also, OMG!!! Davide is living in England and has a lover there!!!!!! And he's left a little present for all parties involved!!!! OMG!!!!!!What a fucking cliff hanger!!! The suspense is killing me. What did he do!!!!!!!!!!