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Luciana is one hell of a manipulative bitch ^_^ And I can't really wait to hear what Liz wanted to say to Edward.

Hmm... repressed people going into the deep end ^_^ it really wouldn't do to keep everything inside... it will do people in.

I don't think that they already have the guy who killed Xavier right... I mean, it could be one of O'Neill's "mistake"... after all, he wanted Edward and Phillips to be together and hmm, Xavier is on the way? A reconcilliation after all, is a no no. Then again, I tend to overthink things ^_^ lol.

Anyway, that said, I can't wait for more ^_^

I can't believe it has taken me this long to leave you a review! I have to say that this story is on the top of the list of updates I look forward to whenever I have internet access. This is so well written, with so many layers of plot lines. I am so glad that you are extending this into a trilogy. I look forward to further character development for characters from this story line and the new ones. You are a professional writer? I would love to read anything you have published. I am rather picky when it comes to reading, and I have such a hard time finding anything that catches my interest off the bookshelf, so when I find an author I like I want to read everything I can. Also, I give you mad props for your update speed. I can't wait for the ending, at which point I will go back and reread it until the sequel is out. Write like the wind!

Chps. 33-36. Oh shit!!! Ok, I'm trying to calm down here and get my head on straight. Robert lied to Edward and Michael when he said that a guy with a Scottish accent hired Steve Cuthbert to kill Xavier. IT WAS PATRICK WASN'T IT!! Patrick hired Cuthbert! And Robert covered for him again by lying!! Patrick wanted Xavier out of the way so Robert could have a shot at Edward (because of his love for Robert.)

Go Lucia go!! I was so freaking happy when she told her mamma off. Edward handled the meeting with her brilliantly as always.

OMG! Edward's sister and mother are such bitches!! I can't believe it! I'm dying to know what they are going to do to make Edward's dad "grow up." lol.

So did Sandstrom kill those boys or not?? And how is Robert involved in it!!! I have a sick feeling that Patrick had a hand in it as well. It seems that Patrick has made it his life mission to clean up Patrick's messes and cover up his dirty secrets.

Wheee!! Such a fantastic story so far!!!

wahh! you did it agian. first of all sorry for not leving a comment the last few updates (skiing trip). The thing with Father Kane=Dave I saw coming but you cerntainly had me with the rest of the chapers. Sven's father and philips being aquintance and being intouch aferall. Philips is quite a shady caracter afterall, I really liked him in the beginning, now I'm not so sure anymore. And wasis up withe David I tought I was in eternal love with Francesco, what about that lover stuff going one.
Did I ever thank you for the triple update ration, I would have been really happy with just one every few days but, you give us a lot to read. Thank you so much! By the way how came you up withe the idea of Edward beeing british? I mean, i think british english is very cool, because it's very classic and it just sound great (I'm no native speaker). But I thought, that most us-americans wouldn't come up with the idea off having an mix of english culture/persons in a story (please dpn't be offend if your non-american, because I allways hate it with I mistaken for another country citizen just because we speak the same languge).

Happily wating for the updates!

Holy shit, so much has happened in the first of these three chapters. The only reason I said I thought Edward and Dave were working together was b/c Edward was the only one who says, "Bloody hell", and he's from Britain. But then I re-read it over and realized that Dave's "friend" is already in England, so thankfully my thinking was wrong!

I can't believe Liz! She honestly thinks that after the shit she pulled, after the crap she just put her brother through, that he'd be there for her? Just b/c his mother couldn't deal with the public in the wake of her idiot husband's scandal? And omg, he's what? Sixty-four?? And he was with a SIXTEEN YEAR OLD???? That is beyond disgusting.

And shit. What the hell does that bitch Lucia want? She's just gonna give Edward more crap he doesn't need.

And what the hell does that guy from Oregon have to do with this? Do they really believe Phillips? Well we know he lied. I was thinking it was O'Neill who offed Xavier. B/c of the accent. But why? What did Xavier have anything to do with all this? The Oregon guy would make sense if he was after revenge. So was he the one who shot at Edward? Or it's all a lie. I'm not sure now what's going on. What was Phillips talking about at the end?

Ok, gonna read the next chapter....

Well, shit. I wanted Sandstrom to suffer. I hope Phillips makes him suffer. Ha, no he won't. He's the one behind the boys' murders, isn't he? That slime. But why? What was his motive for killing all those boys? I dont' get it.

And if Phillips told Edward, Castellani, Karen and Christine that Dave told him he was leaving town, why didn't they storm the train stations, airports, etc.? The should have been showing a picture of him to every ticket agent. Couldn't they have gotten a picture from DMV? Maybe a passport picture? Maybe the homeless shelter had a picture on file or something. I dont' know. It just seems like they finally figured out who Dave is, and then he's gone and they let him slip right from their fingers.

Oh, and I wanted to thank you for the Castle reference at the beginning of one of these chapters! I love Nathan Fillion and did watch that show through season two. Loved that quote! :)

Ok, well, anxiously awaiting tomorrow's installments....

@prostock69: Hey prostock69! lol Yes, when I read that part where Connor said that it isn't that farfetched for Dave and Edward to be "together", I was shocked too! But this whole story shocks me! I'm sitting at the edge of my chair every day for those three chapters!

And hey prostock; I feel I know you b/c I see your name with every story I read on here! lol And you always leave such great reviews!

Ok, now what should I do with the fifteen hours I have to wait until the next chapters are posted? Oh yeah, maybe feed the kids, feed the dogs. Boring stuff like that......

Chapter 13 - the ending of this chapter freaked me the fuck out when I read it last night

Really interesting novel you have here. The characters are interesting and nicely articulated.
Very good concept so far..... not a fanatic of religious people myself... but interesting turn-out.
I hope we can soon read that everyone sees the leutenant as who he really is.
Update soon, and darling please do not make it too long... I started reading this in the morning, was so good could not stop....but my nice behind is kind of falling asleep right now. :P

Buh-bye and read you soon!

I can't wait to see what Mama C. will say. I'm not sure I get what lie Rob is talking about?! Or was he talking about a new lie as in one he had just told?! I'm on my way to fine out ^_^