rate_review Reviews

One of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I am definitely looking forward to book 2!

More great chapters! I love the way you have created a relaxed atmosphere between Edward and Michael (appreciative nakedness), in the comfort stage of their 'romance'. It is a great depiction of progressive lovers in the initial stages of lust and want. It makes me all the more anxious about their relationship (as so intended) in the wake of such changes and challenges. Well written as always. Wonderful

Chapter 30 - This story is too exciting! I need to sleep but every chapter has a cliffhanger. Ahhh, damn you, but it's so good. The writing is addicting, the characters are amazing, the plot is INTENSE, and everything about it is just so damn good.

OH MY GAWD!!! Words can't even express how I feel about this ending....I just keep thinking NO not Paula (but obviously Luciana was the target) and then my brain skips a beat and im thinking Edward dnt leave!!! I am so wrapped up in this story!!! I so can't wait for the next story.....I just pray there is a happy ending involving Michael and Edward cause after all that they have been through it would completely break my heart if they didn't end up together.....or if anything more happened to either or them!!!

Ok, just WOW!!! I'm depressed! I can't believe Edward could just leave like that. He chose his vile, disgusting, bigoted family over Michael? A man who is in love with him? I'm shocked and utterly in pain over this! And now Paula is killed and Edward won't be there to comfort Michael and help him through this. Sigh.

I knew there was someone else behind the scenes pulling the strings besides Phillips! This person is someone who has known Robert back in the day; who taught him everything he knows! And another mystery is the guy he just hired to take out Luciana.

Obviously things are moving to England. Robert, Davide, Edward and the mystery guy Robert talked to who was standing in front of Big Ben when he called him, are there. I'm really anxious to see what happens now! I don't think Michael will be staying in America for too long. At least I hope not. He must go after Edward!!!!

Thanks so much for sharing this story with us. It's been an awesome ride and I can't wait for book 2!!

Chapter 2 - I love this. I love you. How have I missed this story?

Seriously wow. I wasn't sure if I would like this from just reading the summary but I thought I'd give it a try. I am very glad I did. I Read it all in one day, staying up waaay to late; but it was worth it. I like that all the characters are very human. Also the case is intriguing and well planned out. The whole stroy is very well writen. I am looking forward to reading more.
Thank you for sharing this.

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG REALLY?! Dude this is wow...i mean wow lol i'm in shock rite now and i thought nothing else in this story could shock me lol. superb writing!

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG. ok, first, theres a ton of flaws, but who cares! i really REALLY liked reading it. ok!!!??? i cant wait read what happens next. you bad ass! thank you for allowing reviews from people who dont have a membership to this site too!!!

"Lisa, Whatever gave you the idea Edward was in bed with Dave – so to speak? Hm. Interesting thought, though. *gg* And not quite that farfetched as you might think … just saying (and pointing at book 2 – you’ll be surprised)." WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMFG!! Shit. Shit. Shit.!!! You are so evil to do tease us like that!! lol. Lisa, I don't know about you, but my head almost exploded!! :)

Ok, I'm off to read Chps. 33-36.