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Ch. 6: Michael is such an asshole!!!! A jealous asshole at that! I can't believe he had the balls to ask Edward if he's fucking Robert. Even if he was, what business is it of his? And I was squeeeing when Edward replied "Are you jealous?" Ha!!! I love how he gives it right back to him!

And how shocking that Sven's father was sexually abusing him!!

Ch. 7: THANK YOU FOR WRITING FROM MICHAEL'S POV!!! So many times when I'm reading a story like this, where the protag and antag are at odds, I only get read the protag's POV It truly makes the story unfullfilling because I have to assume or guess what the antag is feeling or thinking.

Now on to the story: OMG! I was NOT expecting that sort of reaction from Michael's dad when he told him about Edward!! It left me flabbergasted!! He saw exactly why Michael doesn't like Edward (because he's attracted to him and it makes him uncomfortable). And the type of magazine his father found under his bed was a gay porn one, right? He's known all along his son is at least bi-sexual! And he regrets not speaking to him about it when he found that magazine.

Anyways, I loved this chapter! Loved it!!

Ch. 8: OH MY FREAKING GOD!!! This chapter was hot! So hot!! And Michael's reaction to getting off with Edward is exactly what I expected. He's angry and disgusted. But not at Edward. Deep down, it's at himself for doing what he's always wanted to do. However, I expected him to hit Edward, not spit. Spitting is actually worse in my book than hitting. Poor Edward! this ought to make for a very interesting reunion when they have to get back together to work on the case...lol.

Great story!

Edward makes a nice change from the usual innocent gay guy ‘discovering himself’ but definitely on the prowl for a good ‘seeing to’, and is not ashamed admit it.

The relationship between Michael and Edward is thrilling, and the antagonism between them makes the story much more interesting. Karen is good, a nice intermediary role, helps bind the two extremes; a nice balance.

Love the family dynamics, each one portrayed independently and well as the backdrop to each main character.

Great stuff!!!

Connor; love this new story! :)

It's got me hooked and it's so well-written! What a pleasure to read a story that has no typos, no grammatical errors and no punctuation (or lack of) errors!

I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)

Holy crap! Did you just update when I was reading this? lol Or did you originally post a bunch of chapters, but I didn't notice?

Ok, anyway...on to the next one!

This is an interesting story. Please keep updating.

Ok, adding this to my WIPs reading list. Looking forward to more. Edward is intriguing. Karen is too. Her partner sounds like a very lovable guy (not!). Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

love, love, love this story. love the humour ^_^ looking forward for more ;)

Ch 1. Whoa! This chapter was fantastic! I'm just beside myself at how wonderful your writing is! I love the plot so far. Edward is adorable. Michael is a hot. And Karen is likable too.