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Ch. 13: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you kidding me!!!!!!! No No No!! The serial killer did NOT kill Xavier! Please! Oh shit. This is going to kill Edward! Kill him!!

To be continued????? Are you kidding me?????? Omg, Xavier comes back and he gets killed?????????? But he doesn't fit the MO. Now it's personal. Why is this wacko "Dave" following them? I can't believe he snuck into sexy-Edward's apt. and sexy-Edward didn't wake up. Omg, you better hurry up and update Connor!!!!

Omg, thank you Connor!!!!! I just wanted to thank you for adding an additional chapter there!

Not usually one lost for words but here are a few I believe are fitting.

****FANTASTIC***AWESOME***STUPENDOUS***UNIQUE***IMPRESSIVE***DAZZLING***
***REMARKABLE***AMAZING***TREMENDOUS***EXCEPTIONAL***SENSATIONAL***
***MAGNIFICIENT***OUTSTANDING***STELLAR***

I hope I have made myself clear that I love your story!


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Ch. 14: OMG! I am totally crying right now!! This was an incredibly emotional chapter for me to read! Brilliant writing. Truly brilliant! Poor Edward. I'm so heartbroken for him right now. I know he sorta blames himself for Xavier's death because he didn't hear anything. Just picturing him sitting in the kitchen in the dark crying totally made me bawl my eyes out. I can't imagine waking up and tripping over the body of your murdered lover. It's fucking terrible to even think about!

Now on to happier news: I'm so THRILLED that Michael is calling off the wedding! Not because I want him to be with Edward. I want him to live a truthful life. That is the only way to be truly happy. You can't expect people/family to accept you and love you if you don't accept and love yourself. And I would love (maybe in the 2nd, 3rd books...SQUEEEEEE!!!!.....that Michael tries and finds Angelo. He really needs to see him again maybe to say he's sorry.

I'm still in awe of the kitchen scene. I mean, wow!!! I can't get over how Michael opened up to Edward about his past. Edward knew something had happened that was causing all the homophobic comments. And how he told his mom he's not in love with Anna and he's calling off the wedding. His father knew this would happen. I am sure he's relieved that Michael is finally going to confront his sexuality.

OMG!!! I loove your story! first as i read the summury, i thought, hmmm police, psycic, not really my thing, but now i'm so glad that i clicked. it's really an amazing story with interesting characters and development. now i'm checking whole time for updates. really great job, please continiue)))

Greetings!

I stumbled onto this today and read through. It's a very interesting story. I like what you've done so far. Also, the whole ending with Xavier was very good, very emotional. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Happy writing,
C. Reed

Omg, I just finished the rest of the chapters you posted. What a fantastic story!

It has humor, intrigue, drama, crime, everything! And as I said before; it's so well-written.

I love the banter between Edward and Castellani. And wouldn't Castellani just have a fit if he found out his boss bats for the other team? I loved the way he said, "Welcome to the team." (or something like that), hahah.

Anyway, fantastic story Connor! I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)

I meant to add in my review that Edward reminds me of Patricia Arquette's character in "Medium". I loved that show and how she used the help the police solve crimes. I definitely believe in the paranormal and I like how Karen convinced her boss to use an alternate way to help them solve this crime.

Ok, looking forward to more! :)

Ch. 5: OHHHH!! So close!! Edward and Robert would be so hot together! lol.