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January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Anna really does have blinders on. I do feel kind of sorry for all the time she's invested in Michael though.
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January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So I'm sitting at a wrestling match finishing the latest chapter. I was laughing, I was crying, omg, what an awesome chapter Conner! Castellani is almost ready to out himself to his parents! I know his dad will take it very well, he does suspect after all, but his mom I think will be very upset. Mainly b/c she won't get to plan a wedding. And she considers Anna family. It's such a tough thing for Castellani to do, but he's finally realizing he shouldn't hide who he is anymore.
Looking forward to three more tomorrow! :)
Looking forward to three more tomorrow! :)
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January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit Connor. I was reading this non-stop last night trying to play catch up! You're updating so quickly! :)
I was so focused I got so annoyed when the kids wanted to eat, the dogs wanted to eat. Shit, can't they fend for themselves? Can't they see I'm reading my gay porn? lol
Actually, there hasn't been a story recently that I've been so captivated with. This story is amazing. You are a fantastic storyteller Connor.
There's humor, suspense, crime, and sex. You're incredible! :)
I love the banter (ok, maybe hostility) between Castellani and Edward. I just feel bad for Anna now; she has no idea why Castellani decided to pop the question, and it really had nothing to do with her.
Ok, now that I caught up, I can't wait for the next three chapters! Awesome job Connor; you're amazing! =)
I was so focused I got so annoyed when the kids wanted to eat, the dogs wanted to eat. Shit, can't they fend for themselves? Can't they see I'm reading my gay porn? lol
Actually, there hasn't been a story recently that I've been so captivated with. This story is amazing. You are a fantastic storyteller Connor.
There's humor, suspense, crime, and sex. You're incredible! :)
I love the banter (ok, maybe hostility) between Castellani and Edward. I just feel bad for Anna now; she has no idea why Castellani decided to pop the question, and it really had nothing to do with her.
Ok, now that I caught up, I can't wait for the next three chapters! Awesome job Connor; you're amazing! =)
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January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9: WTF is Michael doing? He got so scared about being possibly gay that he runs back to Anna and asks her to marry him? Fucking idiot!!! It's one thing to deny your sexuality, but to use another person to keep yourself buried in the proverbial closet is a terrible thing to do. And I am so glad that Edward told Karen about what they did. I LOVE the fact she isn't going to sit back and allow Michael to marry Anna with giving her input first. Love it!!
Also, I so enjoyed the banter between Edward and O'Neil. O'Neil doesn't treat him any differently than other guys. He jokes and teases Ed. It's quite cute. That is a man who is secure in his sexuality and doesn't find a gay man threatening.
Also, I so enjoyed the banter between Edward and O'Neil. O'Neil doesn't treat him any differently than other guys. He jokes and teases Ed. It's quite cute. That is a man who is secure in his sexuality and doesn't find a gay man threatening.
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January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ch. 10: OMG!!!!!!!!!! Karen let the cat out of the bag at the end!! Michael is going to be pissed!!! He deserves every bit of angst he's feeling right now. Now he knows Karen doesn't buy his sham engagement with Anna. Ha!!!
I'm dying to know who the killer is. My suspect Daniel (the twin), Robert Phillips, Kevin Norton and Adam Preston. I'm leaning towards twin Daniel, though. There is something not right about how his brother is missing and he slept with the newest murder victim.
I'm dying to know who the killer is. My suspect Daniel (the twin), Robert Phillips, Kevin Norton and Adam Preston. I'm leaning towards twin Daniel, though. There is something not right about how his brother is missing and he slept with the newest murder victim.
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January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 11: God I wish Edward would just punch Michael's lights out! He needs his ass kicked big time! Fucking jerk! Gawd he pisses me off!
Sigh, then I start to tear up when Edward gets the call from Xavier. When he starts to cry I lose it! OMG, I felt all his pain at being abandoned. You don't do that. You don't run away like a coward because you don't want to be with someone anymore. You sit down and talk about it like adults so both sides get closure. Xavier was a selfish ass for doing what he did to Edward.
Sigh, then I start to tear up when Edward gets the call from Xavier. When he starts to cry I lose it! OMG, I felt all his pain at being abandoned. You don't do that. You don't run away like a coward because you don't want to be with someone anymore. You sit down and talk about it like adults so both sides get closure. Xavier was a selfish ass for doing what he did to Edward.
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January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Trace DuBois! Just like Allison Dubois! lol :)
I'm halfway thru chapter eleven, but had to write that before I forgot! lol Shit, I don't know when I've been more captivated by a story......
I'm halfway thru chapter eleven, but had to write that before I forgot! lol Shit, I don't know when I've been more captivated by a story......
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January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Shit, chapter eleven started out so nice..well as nice as you can expect while trying to find a murderer.
But the ending...I was so hoping nothing would happen to the other twin, Nick. Shit. Wouldn't Daniel have felt something if Nick was in pain? I thought that twins can experience each other's pain?
Damn; I hope sexy-Edward (heheh) and Karen get some better news from that Steven guy. Omg, and what a creep that mother was! And I totally agree w/Edward; it was her fault her son withdrew. She drove him away, mentally at least. Maybe she even drove him into the arms of the murderer!
But the ending...I was so hoping nothing would happen to the other twin, Nick. Shit. Wouldn't Daniel have felt something if Nick was in pain? I thought that twins can experience each other's pain?
Damn; I hope sexy-Edward (heheh) and Karen get some better news from that Steven guy. Omg, and what a creep that mother was! And I totally agree w/Edward; it was her fault her son withdrew. She drove him away, mentally at least. Maybe she even drove him into the arms of the murderer!
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January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Shit Connor; I forgot to mention how much I love the quotes at the beginning! Especially the one at the beginning of chapter twelve; boy do I miss QAF! :(
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January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 12: OMG!!! Excuse my french, but this story is so FUCKING AWESOME!!! I mean, I should be working out right now but I can't stop reading!!! Ok, so I was wrong on my serial killer predictions. His name is David. He's very smart...maybe a professor? He lures these kids through his position at a college? I hope they find him soon before he kills any more kids.
I have a feeling Xavier is on his way to see Edward. Especially the way Edward ended the phone call by passing out and Xavier screaming at the other end. I know if I were Xavier, I'd be on my way.
I forgot to comment about the confrontation between Ed and Mike a few chapters back AFTER Karen let it known she knew about them having sex. I think Michael ran to Anna to piss off Edward! Because he was genuinely hurt when Edward said he could care less who he fucked or married. And when he basically told Michael that he wasn't the only guy out there and that he had other things more important to worry about, Michael seemed a bit let down. Even depressed. And the icing on the cake was when Edward then told him their mutual getting off wasn't that memorable as he strolled away. Fuck, that was AWESOME!!! I love how Edward knocks Michael down to size and gets the last word in. I just adore him!!
I have a feeling Xavier is on his way to see Edward. Especially the way Edward ended the phone call by passing out and Xavier screaming at the other end. I know if I were Xavier, I'd be on my way.
I forgot to comment about the confrontation between Ed and Mike a few chapters back AFTER Karen let it known she knew about them having sex. I think Michael ran to Anna to piss off Edward! Because he was genuinely hurt when Edward said he could care less who he fucked or married. And when he basically told Michael that he wasn't the only guy out there and that he had other things more important to worry about, Michael seemed a bit let down. Even depressed. And the icing on the cake was when Edward then told him their mutual getting off wasn't that memorable as he strolled away. Fuck, that was AWESOME!!! I love how Edward knocks Michael down to size and gets the last word in. I just adore him!!