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Oh snap. I thought of the priest before them.

Omg!! Omg, Omg, OMG!! First! The show down with Anna (and her mom) was fucking brilliant! Anna took it better than I thought. But the crowing moment was Michael letting Carla have it. OMG! I was cheering him on! Yes, that felt so damned good to read! And I know Michael felt better for getting that off his chest as well.

Second, the phone call from Dave totally freaked me OUT!! AND Dave didn't kill Xavier? But he saw it happen and how Edward tripped over the body!!! He has to have everyone's places bugged with video devices!! He saw Michael and Edward have sex. He knows Karen is pg, and he saw Edward sleep through Xavier's murder and trip over his body. Now the big question, is who the fuck killed Xavier and why? This just keeps getting better and better! And Michael didn't want Edward to touch Xavier's stuff. I think he's a bit jealous. He wants Edward to get over Xavier and start focusing on him.

And I love how Karen finally figured out at the end that Michael and Edward like each other. I wouldn't have believed it either!!! Her head must be spinning!! Michael has gone from being a homophobic asshole with a girlfriend whom he proposed to, to coming out as gay and liking the guy he was being homophobic to! Crazy!!

OMG! An explosion at Anna's house!!!! WTF??? All hell is breaking loose!! I'm glad that Michael finally came out to his parents.

ARGHHHH!!! I thought for sure it was Angelo!!! What a twist that it's not!! Omg, this story is sooooooooooo freaking good!! I can hardly wait for the next chapters to be posted!!!

Greetings!

Things are starting to line up, it feels like. I think I know what's going on, but I'm going to wait before I make any solid guesses. :) Can't wait to see what happens next.

Happy writing,
C. Reed

Ok, I finally got to chapter fifteen, but I'm a little confused. Firstly, how could these "detectives" NOT think this Xavier's murder isn't related to the others? True the MO is different, but isn't the killer sending a message? Saying that he is watching all of them and knows things about them and where they live, their CELL numbers for God's sakes! Ok, Dave says that he didn't kill Xavier, but HE WAS THERE OR HE WAS CLOSE ENOUGH TO WATCH THE WHOLE THING!!!!! And he's obviously following them! How else would he know Castellani took Edward to his folk's house? And how the hell did he know Karen was pregnant? I agree with Edward or Castellani, whoever said they should check all these places for bugs.

Ok, onto the next chapter!

Ok, I'm on the chapter where they found Steve Cuthbert's DNA on Xavier. WHY ARE THESE COPS SO STUPID????????????? Didn't they just interview him a day or so ago??? He left his wife b/c he blamed her for their son's death. How can these cops NOT REMEMBER HIM??????????? He took their daughter and left his wife. Or am I totally getting the name wrong? No, I'm pretty sure I'm right. I remember the name Cuthbert b/c that was the girl's name who played Keifer Sutherland's daughter on "24". Omg, people, wake up! Why the hell would Cuthbert's DNA be on Xavier?????? How did they know each other????? HE WAS IN THE SHOWER WITH HIM????????

Gah! I gotta finish the chapter! I just had to comment on how stupid these "detectives" seem to be all of a sudden.

great idea for a story. i'm looking forward to hearing more about Edward's powers.

Holy shit. But wait; are they forgetting that someone (maybe Edward?) mentioned school, and the blond victims seemed to know the killer and it was a person they trusted, maybe a teacher. And Angelo's b/f, Darren is a professor at a local college. Hello? Coincidence?

Oh Connor, this story is WAYYYYYYY better than reading all these gay porn sex stories!!! lol Omg, I'm on pins and needles now. I can see how they would want to interview that priest. Can't wait to read more!!!!

But please let me know if I'm going crazy, but wasn't the guy whose son was also one of the victims (number one or five, I don't remember), named Steve Cuthbert????? I'm gonna double-check! hahah

Wow! Michael sounds like a hottie. i like the dynamics of Micheal, Edward, and Karen working together. this is so well edited, I'm impressed. Great work.