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This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories. Love the character development of all the characters.

This story is so cool! Please keep posting! I am suspecting that maybe Philips (spelling?) might possibly be the killer... I am maybe thinking and kinda suspecting that Philips and ONeil could be working together as the "killers" and the "bad guys,"... but I don't know if that entirely makes sense... don't know what their reasons for killing together or at least, working 2getha would be! I am def suspecting Philips though! I am totally wondering if it is possibly more than one person involved in the horrendous crimes. From reading the other reviewers, I think it could even be Christine and Philips. I am guessing the killer wont b revealed in this story. Good work xD
Please post more soon!

I Love this story!! So well-written & well-plotted, I check everybody for new chapters. Thank you. Can't wait for more!

Oh my gosh! So, I am totally thinking the killer is Phillips and his accomplice is O'Neill but don't understand exactly why they are doing this and who else may be involved. Phillips really gives me the creeps with how he is acting towards Edward. I have to mention that when I am reading this story it's almost like I am watching it unfold in 'live action' right before my very eyes. I also have a feeling that there is more than one backstory (is that what you would call it?) going on and once the killer of the young boys/men is revealed another arc has already begun to the trilogy.

I totally love Edward and Michael!!!!

I will check back tomorrow!

Wow! This is an awesome story. It just keeps getting better and better with each chapter.

Okay, I have to say I really enjoy the quotes from the t.v. shows before the chapter starts. I absolutely LOVED Boston Legal. And of course, NCIS is one of my favorite shows as well. I miss Denny Crane so much! Just loved that character!


Ok, Ch. 21: First of all, I adore Karen with all my heart. I love her character so much! She's doing exactly what any female would do when she sees two people who are stubborn and too afraid to speak or act on their emotions: meddle!! She's doing her damnedest to get them together. Love it!!

And then Robert has the nerve to make a play for Edward after turning him down in that gay bar!! He tells him that Michael comes with baggage! Right, like he's one to talk!! And Robert is acting way weird lately. He's involved in these murders somehow, I just know it!! And then Sgt. O'Neill calls Edward "cute" and tries to plead Robert's case for him? WTF??

God, Edward's sister is such an unfeeling bitch! I can't stand it when people put the opinions of others above the welfare of their family. She's a sad excuse for a human being, just like her and Edward's parents are as well. Ugly people indeed! But Shit! Edward's dad was caught with a male prostitute and he died in a car accident! Oh Holy Shit!! Poor Edward! I think I would fly back to London and stay long enough to punch my dad in the face then leave again. Bastard!

My freaking head is spinning with all this new information now!!! Now Michael and Edward don't think Dave is the killer!! OMG! WOW!! I get the sense now that this is more than just about 5 unsolved murders. There is something bigger going on here than just a sick and twisted serial killer.

And now Dave is dead...he gets dumped in front of the police office!

Ch. 22: Whoa, what's this about Nancy Holloway and Karen knowing each other "intimately?"!!! Just how intimately??!!

OMG! I love how Karen spills the beans about why Edward's upset to Michael as soon as Edward leaves the room! That is EXACTLY what a woman would do too! Gossip! :) But she sincerely doesn't like seeing Michael worry about him and she KNOWS how men are horrible about sharing! My husband is the worst at that!! Then after Michael sees the news about Edward's dad he goes and hugs him. My heart melted!! And Then I almost died when they started getting hot and heavy right in the middle of the police station!!! :) So hot!

The whole story about Davey Donnelly, Johnny Mick, Michael's father Antonio is mind boggling! WTF is going on here??? Like I said, something bigger is going on here. I know it's cunningly and slowly being revealed but I just can't grasp it yet! (I love it!!)

You know, Luciana needs to get the fuck over herself and soon because she's going to lose Michael if she doesn't. WHOAAAAAAAAAA!!! Robert and Sgt. O'Neill were lovers!!!!!!!!!!!! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!! Perfect!!! Oh, and Johnny Mick was behind Robert's wife and daughter being killed? Shit! So they had the affair while Robert was married and Lucania found out, she called Robert's wife! I can't wait for her to tell Antonio and what his reaction will be. I don't think it'll be good!

Ok, Michael and Edward finally do something other than kiss!!! Edward rocks Michael's world! OMG, their bantering is funnier than hell but so hot too!

Father Daniele is DEAD!!! Yes!! Bastard! But was it suicide or did someone kill him??

Have I told you lately how much I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY!!! OMG, it's just amazing!!

No! Thank you for sharing this incredibly amazing story:) I was hooked after the first chapter and I couldn't stop reading! I'm sorry I didn't write after every chapter. I just found you today and I loved reading this much at once:) First~I loved the mystery. Second~I have fallen in love with Edward:) Third~I had to know if Micheal was ever going to realize he was in love Edward. Fourth~I kept trying to guess who the killer was. Of course I've been wrong every time. Plus I didn't see the Rob and Patrick thing at all!!! I did think that Mikes mom was involve in some way because of who her best friend was. WoW! I'm so hooked!! I'm here to the end ^_^

I must say, I really like your story! I mean there are alot of great storys around but your's sure is something else. I really like your multiple lines of action intervening (?, sorry no native speaker here). Somethings that catched my thoughts though, why don't they do any more investigation regarding a college/university art teacher? Or who Xavier was intouch with, because the mastermind must have known Xavier was coming to visit Edward, it would be imposible to hire steven the same night as Xavier arrived and have him murderd. It doesn't add up, up I really like it, because I love this typ of storys and I'm always looking for hints and stuff trying to figure things out, as for now I thought O'nile or Philips could have something to do with it, haveing the possiblity to hide mics,cams,etc without rising questions and knowledge how leave no any clues behind. But with this chapters that guess probably ripped to shrads as well. I'm really looking foreward to learn how all of this add's up in the end.

Ok, I just finished chapter 20. It's hard to keep up with you Connor! But I'm NOT complaining! lol

I don't understand why Edward doesn't have a police escort everywhere. Didn't 'Dave' just tell Castellani that he's watching "St. John"? And this guy's a psycho. Why wouldn't they put a police duty on Edward? And Edward decides to go outside? ALONE? While a crazy person is stalking him? He's just as nuts!

Now I don't trust anyone. I love O'Neill, but there I was; not trusting him. Thinking he's gonna do something to Edward. Does he have a slight accent? See, 'Dave' does; now I can't trust even the cops! lol And I blame you Connor! hahah

Shit, even when Liz called. I thought the whole thing was a set-up. Especially when she said that their father was in a car with a boy. I thought 'Dave' got to her, maybe was paying her to say this shit just to get Edward to leave. Maybe it was a trap and he was gonna get him at the airport or something. I know it's a longshot, but did I tell you: I DON'T TRUST ANYONE NOW!

Oh and hey, I really love those quotes at the beginning. I know I said that yesterday, but I really do! Loved the House one with the parasites. Yes, I agree, children can definitely be parasites, but we love 'em anyway. lol

Ok, enough rambling; I gotta read the next chapter.....oh, and who the fuck is the guy who they're looking for?????