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for Vampire Queen and The Mortal

by LadyLuck1990

person Anon
schedule July 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story! And I have to admit, my favorite part had to be Isis saying, "you know she meant her neck right!?". I genuinely laughed out loud for a minute. Probably because I thought the exact same thing and I really wasn't expecting a character to voice my thought. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing that takes away from the story.

Like I said, I really enjoyed it. Though I am left to wonder what happened to Clark. Hmmmm....
schedule April 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WOO! more!
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
keep going.
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story really enjoying it keep up the good work
schedule February 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
keep going.
schedule January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD YES! hurry up and get the next chapter up.

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