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by magnanimousSquirrel

person BlueSilver
schedule January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know which I want more: Camlo to stay with Roseath for a lot longer and get the family love he never had, or begin a romance with the alpha ASAP...
person BlueSilver
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A lion? He got adopted by a lion? This is interesting...
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So, you are long overdue a review form me.

In the latest chapter you ask us why we like your story. I always like these kind of abuse-rescue stories but you seem to take a new approach to it. Not letting the victim wait but actually giving him the strength to escape. I am kind of relieved at the alpha's response, he seems to really care. What I don't understand is how his dad could have not realised what was happening. It just seems unimaginable that he did not know what was going on!

And I wonder about the new female. I could not quite make out what kind of animal she is but she seemed so kind and it will be very good for Camlo to be exposed to a real mother for a change.

thanks for the story and I hope to read more soon.
person gyvareva
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now that was an interesting and unsuspected development :) A very good idea! Maybe she can teach him some things, though by now the alpha is probably not so far anymore... I wonder if he's going to be able to pick up Camlo's scent this way?...
person fluffiebunny
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cute chapter!!!
Please more soon!
person red713
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Neat twist - I wasn't expecting something like that. :-) Thanks for the new chapter!
person lunayolly
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic! Camlo is so cute, I love him! I can't wait to see what happens next and what will happen when Tarun finds him.It's so cute that he is taken in into that cat family.Please more!This is really interesting and I want more!
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh it was just so adorable! This chapter made be giggle =^.^=
schedule January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm I do love your update schedule thus far. *sits down to wait again* <3
person gyvareva
schedule January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great. I just hope nothing happens to Camlo in the meanwhile... The twins earn points, but I like Sarffa even less x)

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