rate_review Reviews

OMGs thay play scene was F-ing ADORABLE!!! KYAAAHH!!! Cutecutecutecutecute!!! My mind is blown away but how cute that was!!!

I like it!! The two chapters that I missed were great! I think something is going to happen to C....But the people who I am worried about are the twins and their sister...What is the plan????

Hope for more soon!

Hmmm... For a suggestion, I think you should find a way to make Camlo and Roseath communicate. And maybe Camlo could grow close to his new siblings as well? So far they really haven't played together, and I think that would be cute.

Honestly, I'm very bad at coming up with ideas, I might not be of much help here. Though I guess I would prefer if Cam's heat passes before he's reunited with his Alpha (leaves potentially more room to develop something strong from the beginning, and our poor Cam would be so relieved I guess... But then again, you certainly would know better than me on this subject. And we need to learn more about why he became Alpha in the first place.
All in all, a pleasant chapter, even if not much happens.

I wonder if Roseath is human, that would be something, anyway I can't waitron camlo's mother to get her's.

okay, this is great but its taking a bit long for them to meet up....losing a bit of interest. Though the promise of a romantic meeting will keep me reading just to see.

Sarffa kinda freaks me out, just a teeny bit. I hope Calmo isn't sick :(

*URG!* Hurry up and find Camlo, Alpha! I just can't wait to see what is the reaction that Tarun will have when he finds Camlo with the lion. XD. The suspense is driving me crazy! I like the way the lion treats Camlo as one of her own cubs. IT'S SO CUTE!. At least he has a mother figure to look up to, even though is temporary but it is still cute. I love it.
I WANT MORE CAMLO AND TARUN! I think they make a cute couple. Please update soon the suspense is driving me crazy!

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HURRY UP AND FIND CAMLO ALREADY!!!!

*ahem*

Hello there magnanimous Squirrel... you have an interesting name.
I read your profile, Welcome to the aff kingdom of naughty things. I can't help but wonder how you landed yourself here. Anyway, welcome, I'm guessing you're young (I may be wrong, but what ever yeah?) and I know that if you keep writing and practicing and reading, you'll churn up some good good butter for everyone here - in a few years.

The overall 'idea' for "Wolf" is quite the catchy theme, so I guess I'll be staying around.... waiting... for the dear Alpha to HURRY UP AND FIND CAMLO!!! *is impatient* Will he find him? Please? Soon? Thank you! xD

- nekoii

It was a nice chapter. I liked how the short parts accent the sense of urgency. Poor twins, I'd be scared too... Sarffa has gone completely nuts. I already have a feeling on how they're going to get rid of her... As for Cam, it could lead to quite a conflict with Tarun if Roseath is starting to feel motherly towards him (nice name, btw).
Concerning Sarffa and Eric's story, I think I personally would prefer if it was a separate one-shot, it just doesn't seem to totally fit in here, but I would definitely like to hear about them ^^