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April 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I also love the progression of the story. The way you have chosen to show progression is actually (and surprisingly) easy to follow. It gives the story a nice, smooth and simplistic flow to it. I originally looked at it and thought it would be annoying to read:
Night
blah,blah, blah,blah,blah, blah
Day
blah,blah, blah,blah,blah, blah
But it was not annoying at all. It made it easier to read, I think.
Excellent choice. Daring!
Night
blah,blah, blah,blah,blah, blah
Day
blah,blah, blah,blah,blah, blah
But it was not annoying at all. It made it easier to read, I think.
Excellent choice. Daring!
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April 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it was nice to learn more about the cubs' personality. Maybe we even could've learnt it earlier, what with all the time Camlo already spent with them (it was really focused on Blue Eyes). But it doesn't really matter I guess ^^
It also was good to see Tarun planning what he would really do when he found Camlo.
He was so tired when he arrived, I hope Roseath's not injured him too bad (ditto for Tarun ; Cam would never forgive him...)
I Poe to read more soon ;)
It also was good to see Tarun planning what he would really do when he found Camlo.
He was so tired when he arrived, I hope Roseath's not injured him too bad (ditto for Tarun ; Cam would never forgive him...)
I Poe to read more soon ;)
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March 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sarffa is officially insane now! Hahahaha!! And it was entertaining how SkyEyes and Camlo were childishly ignoring each other. Keep up their rivalry please (If you know Naruto, his and Sasuke's friendly competition is what I think would suit them) I want to say something about the rest of the story, but I feel it would be the same as almost all my other comments. "It's good" "Cute!" "I loved it!" "Update soon!"
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March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Camlo is and stays my favorite character... I also have a soft spot for Drummond, I hope he's gonna end up with someone to love him ^_~ I'm still undecided as for Tarun, I guess I will have to get to know him a little better first.
If you would allow me, I would just like to make a comment about the writing : I personally found it a little confusing when you changed places, characters and POV just for one sentence. But apart from this, I totally get the fact that it's best to keep us updated on the progress of "the case" ^^
May the next chapter be up soon... ;)
If you would allow me, I would just like to make a comment about the writing : I personally found it a little confusing when you changed places, characters and POV just for one sentence. But apart from this, I totally get the fact that it's best to keep us updated on the progress of "the case" ^^
May the next chapter be up soon... ;)
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March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
my fav is roseath.
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March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i always enjoy your updates
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March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Updates!!!! Oh so happy!!! It felt like so long since I've read this. Positively ecstatic for the next chapter!
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February 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Those kits are sooooo mean!!!! Hope the Alpha will get to Camio soon!!! But how will the female handle the male????
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February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Heh, heh, growling contest. Cute. <3
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February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think Roseath is an awesome Mama. She has stolen the show. Camlo definitely needed to spend some time with a loving mother. Plus it is nice for him to have some siblings. The problem is that he is in heat so he can't hide from his problems forever. I hope he will be able to keep in touch with Roseath no matter how the story goes. Lovely story.