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Yay! They met! Nowwhatnowwhatnowwhat???? I'M SO CURIOUS!!!

I thought it was okay. There's just this one thing ; it can get pretty confusing when you change of POV so often (even if we know each time without a doubt who is speaking) ;)

Well, Camlo wasn't nearly as helpful as expected. He stopped the cat, but then went to bed without a worry even if he was confused. I thought he'd be more compassionate. great job

Roseath is a very forgiving Mama to allow Tarun into her camp after their encounter. I wonder if Camlo will recognize him in the morning. This chapter made me laugh because Camlo definitely enjoys being a pup. he just went right back to the pile of his littermates and fell right asleep. So cute.

OMGs!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Ya know, I'm not to sure why I read this, nor whether or that I'm happy that I did. It's not that I don't like your stories, its that I don't like cliffhangers D: Guh, what happened ?!

In all seriousness, you story is pretty good :) the plot is good and it's considerably original (I love the cat taking him in :)) However, there are two issues I have, one is the skipping around between POVS. You might turn off a few readers if you skip between a number of them a lot, though, you do have a bit of a thing going, how you're keeping it easy enough to follow.

The other thing is of my own personal opinion. It's just, about the Alpha? Like I said, it's my own opinion, but to me, he seems a little too wanting of the submissive, especially since you made it clear that they have had little to do with each other.

Well, it's your story, and it's not bad at all, and you can expect me to stay til the end, so I'm off to write and waste time till your next update :)

Happy writings and quick updates! :D

Evil author!!! T.T i cry while i wait for updates.

Yay new chapter! AARGH cliffhanger! I kind of got the feeling that things would end on a high note. I just hope poor Roseath has not been hurt. That would make me so sad. My ears are drooping already. I hope we get to see the next chapter soon.

Cliffhangers are not my friends, im going to be thinking about it all the while till you update again, good chapter

It is so sad what the sick female is going through. I know she was cruel and mean to everyone, but she is clearly declining deeper and deeper into dementia. She actually sounds like an Alzheimer patient. Especially, since it started early in her life. That is sad. Plus, if a canine was suffering in such a manner, most humans would have the animal put-down, so as not to prolong their agony. But, I sort of hope she does not get killed. If she lives or is cured, the guilt she will live with will be more than enough punishment. Then too, she will more than likely live out the rest of her days alone. I am curious to see what you are going to do with her character now more than ever. If you simply made her into just a mean character, I would have assumed you were simply female bashing. But you have given the character depth, now, by describing this illness that she is plagued with. That is why I can now sympathize with her fate. I can now see her in a different light all together. Good job!