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for Wolf

by magnanimousSquirrel

person bex
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed reading this and hope you decide to continue it.
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More? Please? I'm really enjoying it so far!
schedule November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What I appreciate about this story is that you actually get to see the wolf side/traits of a werewolf. A lot stories don't express that beyond the whole who's more dominate, mating, and running during the full moon.
person anxiouslyeager
schedule November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this version much better!!! Thanks for taking the reviews into consideration!! I really appreciate it! Once again, you've whipped up a nice chapter! can't wait for more!!!!
schedule November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the new turn of events.
person miles
schedule November 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's true that love is blind ! lol
A lovely cat girl with an old seedy-looking cat...
Thank for the update can't wait for more...
schedule November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
huzzah for updates!!!
person Slumber
schedule October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Personally I didn't like that you kept switching POV with that damn Night intermission. It was annoying to keep seeing that word over and over again to switch the characters and it wad disruptive to the chapter as a whole.

It would be much simplier to just keep one POV instead of keep switching it back and forth for ever little event. This frustrates the reader, and it pissed me off honestly.

I believe you have a great story, but inserting Night, Night, late night and night some more took away from the story and was amateurish. Please consider limited how often you switch characters or just make it a 3rd person POV where we can peek inside every characters mind without needing to jump back and forth with intermissions.

I'm glad they found each other, but I'm really just beyond ready for the mating. It's honestly been taking to long.
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(chp7)
I'm back! Hoping to read a chapter or two before i grab some sleep :)
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(chap8)
This szuka sure is a troublesome fellow.

I hope Camlo's kept safe from her. far away from her.

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