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February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
All that build up and you end it like that! ? What a rip!
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February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I appreciate that you took the time to finish it, but maybe you should have just rewritten it like you said you wanted to instead of ending it that way. The ending was rushed and didn't clearly connect with any of the rest of the story. It just looked like you wanted to end it and therefore it hit a brick wall. Please reconsider rewriting it. I loved it from the beginning and was very disappointed with how it abruptly ended.
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June 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I need this story finished. I can't handle cliffhangers anymore. I need to know what happens next. Please update your story.
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September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutely fasinating story, please please try to give us updates when you can.
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September 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you're updating again! Always was (and still am) curious on how you where gonna get Turan and Camlo together. I also think it's interesting what you've done with Camlo's mother. Figure she's gonna come into play again sometime soon. There's just something about her kind of crazy that gets me wondering what's gonna happen with her next :p Anyway, looking forward to the next update!
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September 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So is Rosemane's mate a deadbeat dad or is that jus tthe way that things work in their species? I can't really blame him for wanting to get rid of Camlo. It is sad because i cansee that Camlo really is enjoying beinga kid for a while. I hope he will always be able to come back and visit with his adopted mom.
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August 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to write another chapter soon!?! I am DYING with anticipation for the moment Camlo realizes its Tarun
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August 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! I am really curious about how this will play out. Poor Tarun, already hurt by Rosemane and getting attacked again... At least Camlo might be convinced of his sincerity. Hope to read more soon!
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August 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story! :D Off to read chapter three! Wonder if Camlo just has a bit of a warped view of his Alpha 'cause of his mother and all... after all, the alpha is a friend of his father...guess I'll find out!;)
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August 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Like how you write form a predator's perspective. Wonder what the pack will think of this ;)