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Hehe, I'm a bit hook on these types of fics :P I have pretty dark ideas, maybe something like a gangbang using baseball bats, toys, fists, two guys at once, batons or showers. I'm too embrass to say anything else. You know you just have to love the classics.

I am Hooked....and anyone who is hooked on a good story...well needless to say I want more. This is brilliant and I can't wait for more and please keep it going please 

Amazing, keep it coming.

Update, please! Hardcore stuff here.

Well, I'm definitely interested! Wonedrful story{and yes I know, in reality it isnt wonderful, but alas this is a story written for fun, so yes please, the show must go on!}

I feel bad for James being in this awful situation but that's what happens when you drink and drive then kill someone by your own stupidity especially an innocent child. Though, since it's his first offence and he's young, I think his imprisonment is pretty harsh and they could have put him in another prison facility. I do believe he should pay the price for having killed that little girl but being put in with these type of criminals doesn't seem right but again I am sure the little girl's parents think it's appropriate. How long is he in for, I don't think you mentioned that?

I noticed you have only allowed story for signed-in reviews and thought I would mention you might want to allow anonymous ones for readers who don't have an AFF account. I read this story the other day but was too lazy to sign in and leave one myself.

I look forward to reading more and seeing where you take this. I hope things get better for James in the future.

Good job,

Katie

interested is an understatement

All I can say is more please!