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I think you should have stuff place inside of him like ice, spoons, knives, or forks. I also think he should be doulbe peneration.

What about; tattoos, branding, piercings, chains, leaving him naked round the clock, butt plugs to keep the cum in his ass, ball gags, nipple clamps, cock rings, prison guard dogs/beastality, collar/leash, vibrators, toys, etc. The more you come up with the merrier, LOL.

Oh god, I love this. Please, please write more. I would love to see James get DPed, especially taking two at once in his ass; I would also love to see them humiliate him by lots of guys fucking him and then plugging his hole with something, so he has to carry the cum around for a while. I would also love to see the other guys working out, and James' "workout" being something like riding X number of cocks, to make his thighs burn.

Thank you for a great story.

I want to see poor James get his ass beaten so it's nice and red when he gets fucked. I can't wait to read the next installment

Would love to see poor James drass up as school boy/girl with a coller on and leath then get a very painflully spanking

I think he should always be kept full of cum with no release and not be allowed to touch himself. I would like to see him always bound and not be allowed to even satisfy his own basic needs. If there is a gym, perhaps they could play with him using the equipment. Yes, DP would be nice too and fisting. They should shave all James' body hair with the exception of his head and eyebrows. What about using something like a hose to clean him out? The guards could video tape everything and sell it to make money plus post it online.

Well, I really don't know why, but I kind of like this story and want to read more of it. I am usually not into reading stuff like this but the way you write it makes it addictive. I feel bad for James but he can only blame himself for the situation he is in. I was thinking maybe they could use electric shock type treatments on him not enough to cause serious damage but just to stimulate him. Another idea, when the prisinors go out into the yard during the day maybe they could have James run 'The Gauntlet'? You know, the men can form two rows of human walls so that James has to run between them while being punished/torturted with instruments or something like that. I am one sick puppy, LOL. I am definitely going to have dreams about this story!

Oh, and another thing, you might want to change story from Erotica/General to Erotica/Threesomes/Moresomes especially if story is going in the direction I think it might be.

Maybe introduce a toy of sorts? I'm not sure... but its a good story. Well written.

i agree that this story definitely has great potential for more, so keep up the great work!