rate_review Reviews

Hey there!

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I am just popping in to check and see how you are coming along with the next chapter and hope you are making progess with it.

It would be great if you could post a note under your author panel on how often you plan on updating your stories so I can keep track of them.

It looks like you possibly update just once a month (which is cool) but I am not sure so please could you clarify that for me so I won't sound like an idiot, LOL.

I really like this particular story very much and don't want to lose track of it.

Amazing story!

This story gets better and better! Can't wait to read whathhappens next!

Hi, I just wanted to drop in let you know that I think you are doing a great job writing this type of story
and hope you keep it up! What I like about AFF is that since the stories on it are only fiction nobody ever
really gets hurt so it doesn't make someone an 'evil' person for their liking to read them. I do not condone violence/rape/torture/murder, etc. and never would but this is a fantasy world to escape to created for both
authors and readers alike to have fun with so why not take advantage of it.

I was wondering, is this a repost? I thought I had started reading a story by this same title a long time ago but it was removed for some reason.

Have fun with this and I hope to read more soon!

This has to be my favorite of all of your stories (but I'm still a fan of them all).

Hey, me again, LOL.

I was just thinking that it would be cool if you could put up some Deviant Art for this story of the characters.

Why don't you have Kyle make James wear an electronic dog collar with leash then they can make him crawl on his hands and knees like a dog! They could even stuff his butt with a fake dog tail that wags and put ears on him. I think he would look cute that way!

They could use cigarettes to burn him with, put glass bottles up his butt, I too like the idea of keeping him full of lots of cum and anything else you can dream up. Vibrators. Blindfold him, keep his mouth stuffed either with cock or other items that will keep him gagging. Waterboarding type punishment. Don't let him eat at the table but on the floor and be fed by the other cell mates. When they are all in the shower together, let him wash them all one by one using only his tongue. He shouldn't be allowed to talk except for them to hear him scream or beg.

I am looking forward to reading future chapters and finding out what you have planned for him.

Kyle should take him right up against the bars with James facing towards the corridor and his dick bouncing through the bars then a guard walks by and abuses it on him. All the while, the guys in the cell across the way are watching and waiting for their turn.

hot. I just want to see him get covered in cum